Comments | gymnopedies: if I want to go to pieces/ I can do that

gymnopedies

if I want to go to pieces/ I can do that

Oct 05, 2003 00:17

( if I want to go to pieces/ I can do that: my backhanded, backfiring, backtracking, back-talking, and backstage way of showing connor some love. )

Comments 12

tailwind October 4 2003, 22:32:09 UTC

After that they read all of their books together, and neither of them say anything, but sometimes Connor can't help but laugh at the covers on Murphy's books, and sometimes Murphy can't help but make fun of the titles on Connor's book.

Your talent makes me froth and sputter and want to stab my eyes out.

Also, I love you.

That is all.

tirisar October 4 2003, 23:03:55 UTC

To repeat the incoherency you are already getting from me, oh my fucking god, how dare you be so brilliant. Gah. Gah. I could start picking out my favorite lines, but that would wind up making this comment about half as long as the fic, and that's just not a good idea.
And I still, after all these minutes, really badly want to marry Murphy in all his sci-fi-reading glory.
And the quasi-dating and the glitter and the undeniably male fingernail trimming, and. *explodes*

ceruleanoctober October 5 2003, 07:00:04 UTC

Great stuff. Very well wrtten, even in its choppinss. The broken segments and the fact the nrrative always goes back to Connor's fingernails is very effective. I think this story will linger with me a long time.

rsiobhan October 5 2003, 09:29:47 UTC

Wow. I, uh, wow. I love your writing, with the choppy breaks and everything. It just flows.

Also, wah. Heartbreaking. But in a fantastic way.

epithette October 5 2003, 11:41:42 UTC

Gah, you are brilliant no matter what you say. Yes, sometimes, I was left going, "er, what happened?", but then I got too caught up in your writing that I didn't care anymore.

And. How do you write so fast?! I've been working on a bds fic for a WEEK now, and it's STILL not done, and it seems to be just getting longer and longer and *cries*