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Feb 08, 2004 13:32

"she bleeds herself away tonight ( Read more... )

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writings xsweetkissezx87 February 8 2004, 11:55:33 UTC
hey i really like your writings. Iv talked to you online a few times. Check out my lj if you want. Later

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anonymous February 8 2004, 13:08:59 UTC
i dont get it man ? ur writing a song about cutting wrists, and pistols, its like all the lyrics that i hear from all the other emo-esque bands, they use all the same words like " cold night " and " breathe " , and now more agressive lyrics like senses fail " i want to kill you, and bleed ", it just seems like a big regergatation of everything else thats out there, im sure u got it in you to write original lyrics that have some sort of meaning, because i dont know how many people you know with pistols in their mouths and blades on their wrists.

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anonymous February 8 2004, 13:51:46 UTC
good song, its like my life, pretty bad, hoep thigns go well for you because for me im pretty much better dead, i liek the lyrics, when people are hurt it makes you relate, keep it up, i need to go, i want to leave everyone who hurt me will now see how much pain they caused when they lower me into my grave...good bye

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