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h1k_my_words February 4 2011, 21:12:01 UTC
LOL - I finally found the muse to finish it \o/
I would think it has changed since you read it - I must have rewritten it 1001 times *tears hair out* I think I'm happy with it and hope you enjoy it in it's final form but I'm telling you now, there will be no sequel!!!!!!!- should all be up by the end of the week, if not before - just reading it through as I post :)

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2sexyboys February 4 2011, 21:23:55 UTC
Love your piccy for the fic, and you know I'm going to have to read again to see if changed anything....AGAIN LOL

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h1k_my_words February 4 2011, 21:34:33 UTC
*growls* xx

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rj_scott February 4 2011, 21:35:14 UTC
*miss you*

GVM XXXX

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2sexyboys February 5 2011, 21:56:49 UTC
Mmmmm Miss Hails or me? LOLOL

Most likely you miss Ms perv.....but then again is that Hails or me????

You have to be more specific LOL

But I will take it cause I need the adoration more than Hails does :)

*hugs*

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rj_scott February 4 2011, 21:35:49 UTC
THIRD! Plants flag!

Love this story... you know i do...lovely banner... HUGS YOU HARD smooches D XXXX

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h1k_my_words February 4 2011, 21:40:45 UTC
Oh look - a proper orfa \o/ xx

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rj_scott February 4 2011, 21:43:00 UTC
rofl.... shhhhh... takes one to know one...

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ktrisha February 4 2011, 22:44:16 UTC
I like the first chapter. Cannot wait for the rest.

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hay1ock February 5 2011, 17:04:22 UTC
THanks for reading hun :) c

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serendip50 February 4 2011, 23:17:15 UTC
This is an interesting start.

Jared seems a bit of a douche and he's in a 'marriage of convenience', his I imagine....lol. From his arrogant attitude and promiscuous ways I don't think I can blame his wife...though appearances can sometimes be deceptive...I'm keeping an open mind...:). I got the impression Jared has an aggressive or 'intimidating' side too.

Loved Jensen's written communication 'skills' particularly the "screw you"! comment...:) Though I wonder if he will regain his speech in his time with Jared.

Jared has some lessons to learn, definitely and he is way too self-centred.
But I so love his subtly sexual appraisal of Jensen and his invasion of his space....it's tantalising.

Huh...both boys are lustful it seems....haha.

Very curious about the dub.con scenario.

I'm thinking 'Cold Inside' may be a play on words....

Can't wait for next chapter....will it be posted soon? xx

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hay1ock February 5 2011, 17:08:08 UTC
Hee - thank you for reading babes - your epic comments always make me smile, especially as I wasn't sure about this fic as much as some of the others I've posted recently.
I will be trying to post the remaining 3 parts within the space of the week, though hopefully I'll manage to do it each day, real life allowing :)
*hugs* xx

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