I am enjoying this fic so my comment might sound a little odd. But i honestly can't see what Jared has that could possibly be any good for jensen. Jared has shown himself to be a cold, violent, egotistical man, with little or no regard for the feelings of others. And for my money he's a rapist aswell. Seriously why the hell would Jensen need any of that just because Jared thinks he's found the one. So by Jared's logic if Jensen wasn't the one there would be no problem with how he has acted towards Jensen. Handing out a few spoonfuls of cough medicine does not absolve Jared of his actions in my opinion. I await the next part eagerly. I've no idea how things are going to unfold, but if Jared really thinks he's found the one he needs to do a hell of a lot of thinking about where he goes from here and the kind of man he wants to be.
Really enjoying this fic (in case i forgot to say amidst my ramblings!)
LOL - i like your ramblings. You kind of sound like I did as I tried to find some way to make this turn out okay for them. My brain is very annoying sometimes and manages to get me (and J2) in trouble!! Hopefully you'll be okay with the last part *rereads it like a mad person and laughs nervously* :D XX
I adore persistent!Jared, he knows what he wants and doesn't stop till he damn well gets it...haha. Best way to be for sure!
Jensen's guilt about the tragic accident that claimed his family is unfounded...it was just fate. Just like this meeting between him and Jared is fate....only hindsight is 100%. Jensen has to understand that and move on and Jared has to make him listen...:).
Jensen is very suspicious of Jared's intentions...and I don't blame him really given Jared's confession about his own promiscuity...lol. But in Jared's line of work the art of persuasion is a great asset....and I dare say he is good at his job!
Can't wait to read the final chapter...but sad to see it end so soon. Hugs xx
Really enjoying this hon. I like that you haven't hit us over the head with Jensen's disability, but subtly weave it in there so that remember he doesn't sound quite as he normally would.
Intrigued to see what you do in the last chapter to turn Jensen attitude of Jared around. I can see now what you meant when posted about your dilemmas with this fic way back when! ;)
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I await the next part eagerly. I've no idea how things are going to unfold, but if Jared really thinks he's found the one he needs to do a hell of a lot of thinking about where he goes from here and the kind of man he wants to be.
Really enjoying this fic (in case i forgot to say amidst my ramblings!)
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Hopefully you'll be okay with the last part *rereads it like a mad person and laughs nervously* :D
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Jensen's guilt about the tragic accident that claimed his family is unfounded...it was just fate. Just like this meeting between him and Jared is fate....only hindsight is 100%. Jensen has to understand that and move on and Jared has to make him listen...:).
Jensen is very suspicious of Jared's intentions...and I don't blame him really given Jared's confession about his own promiscuity...lol. But in Jared's line of work the art of persuasion is a great asset....and I dare say he is good at his job!
Can't wait to read the final chapter...but sad to see it end so soon. Hugs xx
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Intrigued to see what you do in the last chapter to turn Jensen attitude of Jared around. I can see now what you meant when posted about your dilemmas with this fic way back when! ;)
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*humps* you, not Jared hehehehe, Jensen on the other hand.....*drifts* Sorry where was I? Humping right *humps X 2000*
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