Comments | h2osprincess: Fic: Full Circle

h2osprincess

Fic: Full Circle

Mar 15, 2008 23:01

*headdesk*

Damned show, driving my muses nuts when they're supposed to be helping me with three other projects in the ridiculously tiny span of free time I actually do have.

Title: Full Circle
Rating: PG-13
Fandom: Smallville
Pairing: Chlark, mentions of Clana and Clois
Spoilers/Timeline: Post-Fracture AU
Disclaimer: I own very little, certainly not ( Read more... )

fic, smallville, clana, clois, chlark

Comments 7

simplytoopretty March 16 2008, 15:13:18 UTC

Just lovely. Why couldn't this happen on the show?

Anyways, this was just fantastic. Heartbreaking in many areas, but that's just Chloe's life I suppose. The ending is so wonderful. It's Clark saying he loves her and Chloe stuck with having to decide whether she can say no again.

Great job!

h2osprincess March 17 2008, 14:42:57 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!

legendarytobes March 16 2008, 17:02:35 UTC

Sighs. It's as lyrical as always. I think the show has gotten to such a degraded point where any Chlark is either wildly AU or tinged with the deepest (and justifiable bitterness). I guess we're the new Clex ( ... )

h2osprincess March 17 2008, 14:56:03 UTC

Sadly, you're right. It's obvious from spoilers/pics that the Chloe scenes were frequently dropped this season.

I have to wonder if things would have made more sense if they weren't, because honestly? This season even left my hubby scratching his head, and he's not looking for arcs or significant character development.

Thank you for your feedback! I really did have to give Chloe back a little of her self-respect, because it's getting more degraded as the season progresses.

I'm totally sold on Immortal!Chloe. Even if they never realized a romantic relationship, the triad of Lex, Clark, and Chloe with eternity to spare is epic.

Glad you liked the shoutout. I just had to. ;)

carbontiger March 16 2008, 18:18:59 UTC

Poetic. Very much in character too. It's a long and winding road and for these two perhaps more long and more winding then most.

The journey is often not to a destination but back to your beginning, seeing that the start has not changed but you have.

Time is often the enemy but it's not in this case.

h2osprincess March 17 2008, 14:57:45 UTC

Thank you for your feedback. You captured the essence of what I was going for.

:)

monicaop November 28 2009, 02:03:22 UTC

*sigh* oh... love it, love it... thanks!!!