Comments | h2osprincess: SV Fic: Horizon

h2osprincess

SV Fic: Horizon

Jul 15, 2008 21:48

Title: Horizon
Rating: PG
Fandom: Smallville
Pairing: Kid!Chlark
Spoilers/Timeline: Pre-Season 1 AU
Disclaimer: I own very little, certainly not these characters. Please don’t sue!
Author’s Notes: With the dearth of Chlark fic lately, I decided to dust this one off and put it out there. It’s my first attempt at kid!fic, so try not to laugh if it sucks ( Read more... )

fic, smallville, chlark

Comments 15

legendarytobes July 16 2008, 05:37:03 UTC

Also, I love the background. Pete is in character as bitter as always and he's still trying to score a girlfriend. I am very curious about this toilet paper incident, myself. I also must confess that I love the description of Chloe, of the girl who only talks about the Planet and about how she's going to be there and take her paper now since it will be valuable. She's funny and snarky and cute and so utterly Chloe that I love her. She's just amazing and thanks for this.

And for poor Clark, who loves astronomy and who isn't even missed when he's gone.

Thanks for writing!

h2osprincess July 17 2008, 15:09:13 UTC

I'm glad you liked it! The way Chloe always held tight to her dreams, even Clark, always endeared her to me. It's part of what bugged me about season 7, because letting go is just so utterly not her.

Yeah, I miss a Clark I want to feel sorry for.

You're welcome!

legendarytobes July 17 2008, 20:54:59 UTC

I don't buy her just giving up. I'm all about waiting until the last minute because Chloe doesn't leave journalism ever, even if she's being exploded by billionaires.

angelbsb July 16 2008, 05:50:01 UTC

that was awesome . loved how in character you had clark,chloe and pete. how the guy that put his arm around chloe remined me of dean lol. pete is a butt never gets the girl lol. clark really liked her at least we know she will see him again in about 3 or 4 years.

h2osprincess July 17 2008, 15:10:11 UTC

Thank you! It was my first kid!fic, so I'm glad you felt the characterization worked.

simplytoopretty July 16 2008, 13:40:43 UTC

That was lovely and sweet. Such a nice first meeting, even if Chloe's boyfriend came and stole her a way in the end. At least Clark got her email and a little hope isn't a bad thing.

I'm going to echo what Toby said and says it's sort of sad no one noticed Clark was gone. He was really invisible back then, wasn't he? And that's kind of sad, since I always feel for the kid that isn't popular and is often overlooked. I'm glad Chloe didn't overlook him and wanted to spend the time at the museum with it.

h2osprincess July 17 2008, 15:12:20 UTC

Aw, thanks!

That's one of the things I love about Chlark. Chloe noticed him when he was invisible.

legendarytobes July 17 2008, 20:53:41 UTC

That's what makes it so sweet, their relationship. She was always so taken with him.

black_panda_ops July 16 2008, 15:30:21 UTC

Oh I loved the comment about the bus The meeting Chloe is super cute, The description made me super nostalgic. I love how he was so akward and confused.

h2osprincess July 17 2008, 15:13:08 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad the story was good for some nostalgia!

iliana_1 July 16 2008, 16:59:20 UTC

That was gorgeous and you wrote all the characters perfectly. It's so like Pete to try and score away from school because of the toilet paper incident (whatever that was, it sounds traumatizing).

Chlark were perfect and their first meeting was very sweet with Chloe being the chatty snarky one and Clark being awkward at first.

Luverly!!!

h2osprincess July 17 2008, 15:14:18 UTC

Aww, thanks! I'm trying to venture forth from the angst. Season 8 spoilers are too depressing for me to add to the mix. :P

legendarytobes July 17 2008, 20:54:22 UTC

Thanks for that. I think kiddie!Chlark is the way to go and you were excellent at it.