SV Fic: Frozen

Jul 31, 2009 00:02


Rated R for some pretty adult themes.  Even creeps me out a bit, but dark times inspire the strangest things.  Link to my archive below:

Frozen

fic, chlavis, chloe, chlollie-ish

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peachmacaroons July 31 2009, 13:39:06 UTC
wow, wow, wow, wow, wow, wow, wow.

I have like, no words. This was creepy, scary, and really beautiful. And so, so hopeless.

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h2osprincess July 31 2009, 14:12:37 UTC
Thanks, I think. It's the darkest thing I've written in a long while. My muse suddenly woke up with the news out of Comic Con, so I'll probably post more stories soon.

I think getting back into fic has been a little therepeutic for me, because it's helping me let go of canon once and for all. I didn't watch for most of last season, but I kept up with the storylines and popped in for a couple of episodes. It's a mistake I don't plan to repeat this year.

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simplytoopretty July 31 2009, 13:41:13 UTC
Now I have shivers, after having read "Frozen". You weren't kidding about it having a creepy element. It's dark but the writing was compelling and I was almost holding my breath at the end.

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h2osprincess July 31 2009, 14:14:43 UTC
Thank you for reading!. If I were any sort of a decent horror writer, I would continue. I'm just not sure it would be good for me or my readers.

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chaliebrown363 July 31 2009, 17:13:59 UTC
You weren't kidding with the creepy. It's really dark, and I love it.

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h2osprincess August 3 2009, 01:57:11 UTC
Yeah. My next few are less squicky, I promise. Thanks for reading!

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tehzo August 2 2009, 10:13:26 UTC
I got so excited when I saw just the title--the possibility that you'd written fic!...I actually double checked to see that, yup, it was you and the subject line did say SV fic...:)

Then I saw the Chlollie mention and that got me even more excited. Any shape or form, I love them!

And then--I merrily began to read...dark-shmark warning...I had fic! From you!

...It was so, so...chilling and kinda merciless.

He lost faith and forgot hers.

I loved this so much.

“I slit my wrists. I hung myself from the rafters...

How she basically lists one after the other, the ways she's tried to kill herself, caused this onslaught of horrible images in my head. It was horrifying and powerful.

“At first, I thought it was my ‘gift’. That I would never be free. Then I felt them.”...Oh wow...she went through all of this, all by herself. The fact that she survived this psychotic situation (because, of course, she had no choice) just made it easier to see why she'd feel Chloe Sullivan was dead ( ... )

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h2osprincess August 3 2009, 01:59:46 UTC
I'm glad I found my muse again, too! Thank you so much for reading and sharing your impressions!

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