Day 2

Nov 02, 2009 21:44

By: h_johanna
Rating: pg
Wordcount: 252
Warnings: smoking
Disclaimer:Rawr, mine and mine alone.

Day 2: Emily )

original fiction

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ginnyvos November 3 2009, 20:28:21 UTC
Ooooh I like this! Especially this bit for some reason:

“Hush you you-ah! This is your favourite right?” I smiled for she was almost right. I had no favourite songs, but if I had this would be among them.
“I knew it!” She said, “Gods, you look beautiful when you smile.”
“Do I?” I felt skeptical, but inside I was beaming with the compliment

I love how we're getting more and more of an idea of these characters and their interaction. Lovely.

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h_johanna November 4 2009, 07:32:44 UTC
Thanks, I still don't really like myown writing so far. I'm hoping real inspiration will hit me soon. Tonight a post of noth today and yesterday

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