A Pantoum, Leading to a Divorce

[habbalite]

She thinks carefully about placement,

The thickness of the line denotes its permanence.

A simple flurry of passion on skin never sates her

Carving lines with the precession of a razor blade.

The thickness of the line denotes its permanence.

His motions are clean reflected in the mirror

Carving lines with the precession of a razor blade.

This kind of joy

Comments

[dahlia112484]

see, this kind of shit just takes a sort of talent that i just cant manage, lol. fricken amazing.

[habbalite]

Pantoums are easy to write. with the way each line is repeated it basically writes itself.
I am trying to play with some much harder forms.
just to give myself a challange.
I've spent to many years only writing free verse, form is a nice change