Comments | hablarloco: Only Your Kisses

hablarloco

Only Your Kisses

Sep 02, 2012 00:19

Only Your Kisses
Pairing: Jessica / Yuri
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: ~3000
A/N: Not real. Edited for grammar.

( A chill from winter lingers in the night air. )

yuri/jessica, yuri, one-shot, jessica

Comments 21

scratchdnote5 September 1 2012, 15:39:14 UTC

Spot. Brb.

scratchdnote5 January 1 2013, 23:24:23 UTC

This was a really interesting oneshot. The detail was nice because not many people tend to put detail in their smut scenes and the moment where everything came together-- there were some nice images and kudos to you for being able to create the imagery.

Hot Yulsic shyluv87 September 1 2012, 16:27:31 UTC

OMO it's HOT.
Yulsic's make up sex is epik....daebak..
Kekekekekeke so it's just jealous Sica on Yul's kiss scene

Re: Hot Yulsic hablarloco September 4 2012, 23:22:00 UTC

They're both just so easily jealous of each other :)

Glad you enjoyed it, thanks for reading and commenting!

hotcocoababy97 September 2 2012, 06:13:37 UTC

omogod...i can't even form a proper comment. that was way too hot for me, but i really don't mind ;)

hablarloco September 4 2012, 23:33:51 UTC

too hot? I hope you didn't get a fever! But I'm happy you liked it, thanks for reading and commenting :)

corals2252 September 2 2012, 08:56:33 UTC

There's an underlying angst despite the hot sex and i love it. Not another swp, good job ;-) Sica needs to stop being insecure. Thanks fo writing!

hablarloco September 4 2012, 23:27:44 UTC

It took me a long time to come up with a plot that fit and I only filled it in after I finished writing the smut tbh, so I'm happy it worked for you.

Thanks for reading and leaving a comment :)

brackdiamon September 2 2012, 23:22:52 UTC

Ummmm I worship you.

hablarloco September 4 2012, 23:28:45 UTC

I am not worthy!

lol, thanks for reading and commenting :D

brackdiamon September 5 2012, 01:40:47 UTC

Until I even write my own Yulsic lemon that can compare, I'd say that you definitely are worthy!

No problem. This will.. stay in my head for a while. :O