Part One: The Present

[hadtobegoo]

Dramatis Personae

Steve [our strapping young hero]
Jessica [hero’s girlfriend but in the current instance, his combatant]

The Setting:

The 18th hole on the Daytona mini-golf course at Speedzone.

The SceneA humid June 18th evening, in the year of our lord, 2004

Comments

[saralicious]

The next time I see Jessica I will be giving her a high-five for handing your ass to you at the mini golf range.

[sanguine37]

The present was lovely. Now I'm ready to hear about that past you claim to have.

Oh, and hello there, Goober.

[starfyer]

Hahahaha. Ah, mini golf rules.

[cruelnails]

Sweet. That was just like Legend of Bagger Vance.

Only without the kindly black man.

And this didn't suck.