YAAAAY

[hagrids_beard]

Quill will be back and fully functional on the 9th *dances a merry jig*.

Z&A have sent an Open letter about how we should now treat the new one. Which is fair enough, they have to pay for the bandwidth. Im now feeling incredibly guilty about all the crap I haveposted there, esp on the Pensive's British thread *blushes* Ive got a feeling Im one

Comments

[hildigunnur]

Am a poor, willing sap. Would read said fic if you would send it to me. Shall give constructive critism if needed. Can be reached at ingai@vortex.is.

[hagrids_beard]

Just sent it.

ermmm, in my defence would like to point out haven't really done this before. At least it seemed original, Ive been trawling through the ff archives and theres not many serious parvati fics knocking about.

Not that this helps make it any better. Just re-read it again and it seems to be rewriting itself to be worse after everytime I read it, so Im trying to think of some plus points :)

[cabari]

My darling dearest, if you need another, please consider me as an alternative to suicide.

(whoa. Completely random Princess Bride refence)

[captainbianca]

"Hallo! My name is Indigo Montoya. You killed my father, prepare to die."

ROFL The Princess Bride ROCKS! =D

ROFL Sorry randomness. I could't resist. I love the Princess Bride.

[hagrids_beard]

sucide..cabari. Hard choice :)

Well if what Hildigunner says doesn't damage my fragile ego too much, and if you think you can bear it without tearing your skin off, I'll send it to you.

Oh you are blessed.

[soupytwist]

Nah, I suspect your kind of randomness would still be okay at the new Quill. Intelligent, amusing and generally interesting/relevant - you're fine, really. They're just trying to get rid of "I just 8 peas, hahahaahah" stuff.

And I am more than willing to read the revised fic, since I did actually like it and my eyes might be a bit screwy but that happened way before I read your story, LOL.

ps. I am denying the you're thing ever happened. :P :)

[hagrids_beard]

you sure dear?

Ive got a d.crystal grammar book that you might be interested in to clarify this tricky rule in your (note correct usage) mind. Its got a whole chapter on contractions, and when it is and isn't necessary.

hehe, did someone actually say. 'I 8 peas' or the equivilent? Are you sure it wasn't you boasting about your (observe that to say you're here would be erroneous) habit of eating the frozen stuff? The spelling and the boasting sounds like the work of Katie.

Have I mentioned you're (note usage, and the difference between this case and the other examples) such fun to take the piss out of?

Btw, I haven't actually made many changes apart from the paragraphing, comma use and tidying up a few phrases. Thats why I need another sap to look over it. To see how I could improve it, I'm stuck on where to go.

[soupytwist]

I'm sure, dear. :)

I don't anyone actually said 'i 8 peas', I was just making a point. And I am above such petty piss-taking. :P :)