The Interview (Part 1)

[hahahahagas]

Title:The Interview (Part 1)
Characters:Sergio Ramos/Fernando Torres (pre-slash), Pepe Reina, Jesus Navas, Iker Casillas
Rating:NC-17 (I curse alot so so do these lot)
Word count: 2048
Disclaimer:All complete lies unfortunately
Summary:Sergio's version of events of a job interview

A/N:Ok so this is my first time writing any type of story so I'm sorry if

Comments

[narusaku4vr]

Bad??? What do you mean bad??? This is wonderful my dear!
Sergio's ranting is so adorable. I can just imagine him doing that. Fawning over Nando like that!!! xsktsxskdjhhx (my keysmash is ugly).

I want Nando's POV too!!!

Looking forward for more!

[hahahahagas]

Thank you sooooooooooo much!!! You have no idea how nervous I was posting this I'm so ridiculously happy you liked it :-D

Your keysmashing is beautiful in my eyes at the moment tbh :-)

Thanx you so much for reading this and such a lovely comment.

xx

[jumping_down]

Pretty interesting. But, it makes it easier on the readers to just have one font in the story, FYI. :)

[hahahahagas]

Thanx you :-)

I'm such a sap I thought it would make it easier with the distinction between the scene and the memory so I'm really sorry about that but really appriciate you telling me :-D

Thanks so much for reading and commenting.

xx

[jumping_down]

If it helps, in most stories, if it's a flashback, they just put it in italics. :)

[hahahahagas]

To be honest and I can't believe I'm admitting this but thats what I was going for :-/ I know I mentioned this is my first fic but its also the first anything I've written since essays for my homework in school and that was with pen and paper so its also the first thing apart from comments that I've written on a computer lol ... God I sound like a complete moron .. :-) feel free to mock hahahaha :-D

[duckiidoo]

Just a tip, try to leave fonts consistent. It make it easier for the eye to flow better when reading. c:

[duckiidoo]

And it's not bad at all, I actually like the characterization you've given each character.

I'm not sure how long you intend to make this but it would be wonderful to see a mini-series of sorts.

Anyway, keep up the good work.

[hahahahagas]

Oh thank you so much ... I have ideas for a few chapters after Fernando's POV but haven't written down anything ... waiting to see how the first part went down :-D so it might actually turn into a mini-series of sorts.

Thank you so much for reading and commenting and being so supportive :-)

xx

[annarr01]

it's awesome!!!!!!
really!!
i'm hooked to the point of threatening you! you better update soon! lolol
i'm kidding, of course! but i would love an update soon :D i wanna think that fernando was very angry because he is either a stuck up bitch or he realized sergio was too hot to stand being in the same room as him without jumping him? haha
thanks for sharing

[hahahahagas]

Hahaha oh my god *blushing* thanx so much I was so nervous about posting this I'm so happy you liked it!!!!

I should be posting Fernando's POV really soon hopefully .. just have to type it out with the the typing gift God gave two of my fingers lol cos I never planned on posting this so to get is out of my head I wrote it down in a note book with a pen like a cave person :-P

Thanx for reading and leaving such an amazing comment :-D

xx

[lovinthelads]

*flails*

MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!

X

[hahahahagas]

*jumps around clapping hands like a deranged seal*

THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!!!! (hopefully really soon)

xx