The Interview (Part 1)

[hahahahagas]

Title:The Interview (Part 1)
Characters:Sergio Ramos/Fernando Torres (pre-slash), Pepe Reina, Jesus Navas, Iker Casillas
Rating:NC-17 (I curse alot so so do these lot)
Word count: 2048
Disclaimer:All complete lies unfortunately
Summary:Sergio's version of events of a job interview

A/N:Ok so this is my first time writing any type of story so I'm sorry if

Comments

[thegreat_ccc]

Aaaah, this was great and I'm excited for more! :3

[hahahahagas]

Thank you !! just hope I don't ruin it with the next part :-D

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[chrisy1108]

Oh it's sooo cute! I actually laughed out loudly when I read the part of pepe making fun of his nose. LOl
That was hilarious! N I can't wait to see sergio's dream all come true;)))
Only One thing bother me...the font...I just can't read them! Hurt my eyes...can u please edit them maybe???
Lover the fic! Plz update soon:)))

[hahahahagas]

Thank you so much I'm so glad you likes it and found Pepe funny I love him irl so hopin people liked the way I wrote him :-D

I'm so sorry I hurt your eyes I have edited it now I would have done it earlier but I had to figure out how ro actually do it :-D Hopefully its better now.

Thanx so much for reading and commenting.

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[hahahahagas]

Thank you thank you thank you I'm soo delighted you liked it I was so nervous posting and everyone has been so lovely :-)

Hahahahaha no comment .. hahahaha don't worry we all go abit gaze-eyed when thinking of The Ramos :-P)

Thanx so much for reading and commenting.

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[titania_torres]

the story is promising and interesting. I am curious as to what Fernando's POV is and what will happen.

The one thing I suggest is getting a beta to help with the spelling and flow of it so that it reads easier. but other than that great work =)

[hahahahagas]

Thanks so much :-).. Shouldn't have to wait to long for Fernando's POV and you'll be happy to know I have a lovely lovely person who is gonna beta it for me :-D

Thanx so much for reading and commenting.

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[sukha4]

Oh it's brilliant. Very promising start.

[hahahahagas]

Thanx sooo much!!! I should be posting the next part pretty soon, just hope everyone likes it.

Thank you for reading and commenting.

xx