Comments | hairlip: loly poly loly loly poly

hairlip

loly poly loly loly poly

Jun 29, 2011 10:33

TITLE in lieu of celebration
FANDOM t-ara
PAIRING hyomin/jiyeon
WORDS 300
RATING g
A/N i didn't hear of a party, okay! so i made one up.

( congratulations )

jiyeon, hyomin

Comments 4

firequakes June 29 2011, 15:56:50 UTC

you should write cute things forever.

also, i keep forgetting hyomin is the leader now :(

THANKS MAN hairlip June 30 2011, 01:23:54 UTC

NO I SHOULDN'T. it makes me feel awkward. lol i just have her little polka dot outfit to remind me. it's like "this is what the leader wears."

augmenti June 30 2011, 04:35:52 UTC

omg this is so adorable \o/ i love this so much, i love the detail you place on things, like the sweating soda against jiyeon's arm the ending, where you explain why they link arms. it accents the moments and brings so much visualization to them!

also, i didn't know hyomin was leader now! i really like that t-ara does that, shares the load. it's a lot less stress on them if they lead for so long instead of forever always.

hairlip June 30 2011, 06:56:33 UTC

GOOD LORD, THIS ENTIRE COMMENT. it makes me happy that you point them out, because they're the few fun things about writing.

yes, and i think they put a little more spotlight on the leader? when boram was leader, i actually felt like i was noticing her more. so since we're talking about t-ara, have you watched roly poly? NEEDS FIC BADLY.