It just feels so powerful that poem, I can definitely identify with it.. I especially like the "swinging hip that burst into your field of view" - an instant image there. I always thought it funny when around some of my guy friends that they would turn to look at a woman when she was barely in their line of sight. We used to joke that men just had some kind of radar, at times it doesn't seem to be a joke.
Thank you so much for sharing the poem. Does she write much poetry, it does look like she has an inner meter for verse :)
She hasn't written any for a while, but she used to write a lot. It is one way that she processess, so when she is doing well, she tends to write less, but she does write beautiful and powerful poetry. I'll let her know she has a fan
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It just feels so powerful that poem, I can definitely identify with it.. I especially like the "swinging hip that burst into your field of view" - an instant image there. I always thought it funny when around some of my guy friends that they would turn to look at a woman when she was barely in their line of sight.
We used to joke that men just had some kind of radar, at times it doesn't seem to be a joke.
Thank you so much for sharing the poem. Does she write much poetry, it does look like she has an inner meter for verse :)
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