Fic

[hakuren]

Title: See Everything
Words: about 2,200 or so?
Rating: PG at most, for death I guess
Pairing: Implied, one-sided Kairi-Sora, and implied/stated mutual Riku-Sora
Notes and Warnings: Life is weird and death is weirder and it's all very scary, I realized. Or anyways, that's my explanation for this weird, possible ending/AU one-shot, mutant thing...I've

Comments

[airenko]

That was really sweet and so sad at the same time.
I can really relate to how Kairi and Riku are feeling, which makes me like it more. One of my best friends died over the summer, he had cancer, and I never once visited him in the hospital or even told him how much he meant. It wasn't a romantic feeling, just a friendship. But still...it's the only thing I regret, haha. I'll shut up about this now. :/ I'm sure you don't want a stranger telling a life story. v.v;;
Anyways, good story!

[oceanic_vision]

That was amazing, it was one of those bitter-sweet feelings. It was sad, but it wasn't angst. It was tender in the right moments. I especially liked this line, ". . .because that suits the boy with eyes the color of forever…untouchable." I don't exactly know why, but it stood out to me completely. I adore your writing style, I wish I could write more like you to be honest. Half way through this chapter I thought of writing a companion piece from Sora's pov, yes, even in death (it could happen :P) for your story. But, then figured it'd be a little weird. Yeah, I'll shush now. good job on the story though!

[starvinbohemian]

This is beautiful. :)

[loveotter]

I friended you! Feel free to friend back. :D

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[aeternitasbeach]

And maybe it’s a little inappropriate, but he smiles a bit here, because that suits the boy with eyes the color of forever...untouchable.

*sigh* I could very well quote every other line. But yes, this was definitely heart-wrenching but in a beautiful way? Sweet, sweet pain. Oh Riku. My heart truly went out to them here, both Riku and Kairi. And in my mind, this is precisely how Riku would probably handle the situation (heaven forbid) were it to happen.

also, I hope you don't mind me friending you *loves your writing and graphics and KH in general* and I found you through your graphics/icon comm <3