Comments | hakuryu08: Commencing Combat: Chapter 2

hakuryu08

Commencing Combat: Chapter 2

Nov 25, 2009 18:20

Finally! I wrote the second chapter of Commencing Combat. I'm so sorry it took so long. I have more time now so hopefully I won't go that long without updates again. I strongly suggest at least reading the first chapter of Commencing Combat before reading this (click "Another Battle Series" link to the left). Another Battle and Prelude to War ( Read more... )

world conquest attempt, zuko, 10 hurt/comfort, fanfiction, sokka, atla

Comments 4

alexb49 November 26 2009, 03:06:15 UTC

Very sweet! Keeping them in character in an AU and younger then their canon ages is tough. You're doing great.

hakuryu08 November 27 2009, 02:49:38 UTC

Thanks so much! I'm constantly worrying about keeping them in character. Sometimes I feel like my version of in character is based more on other fanfics I've read then the actual series.

rowzen November 26 2009, 17:02:38 UTC

The heart-felt emotion gives this such a tender, timeless quality.

Thank-you!

hakuryu08 November 27 2009, 02:54:22 UTC

Your comment really made my day. I'm so glad you liked it!