The Mercy of the Almighty

[halcyon_morn]

For scylladakylla, because when I really like someone, I find it nice to rewrite one of their fics, only all shitty. (I swear, I actually had this idea before I read Connect, and I just couldn't help following through with it. Forgive me, Scylla! D:)

Title: The Mercy of the Almighty
Pairing: Onew/Key
Rating: G
Length: ~1600 words
Warnings: Stolen clothing

Comments

[zerocountt]

kajsdhaluifhhlajdlhaisudhasldjhlsd SO SWEET. ;______;
damn this is beautiful. every words of them is beautiful.
♥ ♥ ♥

[halcyon_morn]

Aw, thank you. I'm glad you liked it.

[dear_whimsy]

THIS IS STILL CUTE. and sad. :( you made his fail heartwrenching instead of hilarious. *NEVER FORGIVES YOU!!*

[halcyon_morn]

If you don't forgive me, I won't write more fic for you. :/

[dear_whimsy]

Well...... fine. :| You make a hard argument

[mnemo_syne]

Oh, adorable, so sweet and omg I can't stand it when Onew feels bad, augh. Really well-written! Both Key and Onew seem spot-on. And so cute. I really enjoyed this, thanks so much for sharing it!

(P.S. I love the small thing of Key wearing Jonghyun's sweatshirt. :D)

[halcyon_morn]

No, thank you, and I'm glad you thought I was on with my characterization.

(That's one of my favorite bits. :D)

[fatdix]

kjshdjg this is so terribly cute. Onew, I thought you were old enough to be up to some real trouble. XD

[halcyon_morn]

He probably is old enough, but...he's Onew. XD

[ex_gyuhyun]

oh god that was so cute ;____; jinkiiiii. ♥

[halcyon_morn]

Thanks! *holds him close forever*