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yeolbear May 26 2012, 17:26:47 UTC
spotting first and omg giant blocks of textbjkhsadjasddasd

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halcyondusk May 28 2012, 04:41:25 UTC
ROLLS ON YOU.

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yeolbear June 12 2012, 13:31:09 UTC
GETS ROLLED OVER
now you see a flattened hyerin are you happy

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yeolbear June 12 2012, 13:41:05 UTC
i'm not even a kris fan but i thoroughly enjoyed reading it at like 2am and i loved loved /loved/ it, okay. i suck at commenting so i can only say how much this was so believable and so real and i could feel entirely what kris was feeling :'( AND KRISBER KRISBER IS THE BEST AND UM well i loved yixing's characterisation. everything in this was horribly realistic and god, the bullying part. ouch. but then, it seems so plausible, so likely for it to have happened. :c

because i suck, here have many many many many sparkles and please eat them o/
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kantamu May 26 2012, 18:51:56 UTC
JO I LOVE YOU AND I WILL NEVER BE ABLE TO POST A COHERENT COMMENT maybe we'll see (also good morning i just realised it is morning for you oops.)

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kantamu May 26 2012, 19:00:46 UTC
❀.•❤•.✿.•❤•❀.•❤•.✿.•❤• <-- ps this is not just a fucking heart. that is several hearts and flowers.

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halcyondusk May 26 2012, 19:11:10 UTC
AM AWARE I CANNOT COUNT AND CANNOT SHAPE

HERE HAVE AN ACTUAL HEART ❤

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kantamu May 27 2012, 04:53:19 UTC


i know i mentioned this on twitter, but i adored yixing. actually, i think this is my favourite characterisation i've ever seen of him in english fic. i loved him. and i really, really love you. just, in general. i also think you seriously did a phenomenal job. i said this before! but this was just really, really, really overwhelmingly great. complete.

and of course, our favourite trilingual dragon who can fly <3 and amber!

you're great, you're amazing, you're awesome ♥

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deasyellow May 27 2012, 01:44:02 UTC
SPOT BECAUSE I GOT CHEM TO STUDY BUT AKDHGKHJKAHKAHS JO

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halcyondusk May 28 2012, 04:41:57 UTC
SFGLHKSFGJLKJGFSHKJ DESSY

i hope your chem goes well ;u;

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ubomb May 27 2012, 02:49:14 UTC
i must admit you actually made me cry like twice (thrice) through this. i don't know omg jo how do you even do it? like whoa. i could almost hear this in kris's voice omg :( it just seemed so real and so sdkjflñgñ---- heartbreaking, at some points. i just love how you made everything so coherent sdjflk if you told me hey this is what actually happened i just wrote kris's biography I WOULD BELIEVE YOU. honestly. and yixing my baby ugu ;___; and AMBER o lord i need someone like her in my life. this is so perfect let me keep it close to my heart forever yes ;~~~~; also i read the whole author's note where are my flowers

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halcyondusk May 27 2012, 05:04:16 UTC
aaaaaaaa ;a; /hands you a tissue

THIS WAS DIFFICULT i was sitting in a cafe one day (not doing work obv) and i had overwhelming duizhang feelings and wondered about his names an his identities and just u____u. all the rumours and everything and planned this out. trying to string together the scenes was the most difficult ;u;

YIXING BABY the cutest AMBER is also the cutest

thank you for reading ;u; HERE FLOWERS


... )

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ubomb May 27 2012, 05:41:12 UTC
;___; ddflgñkffgjfs i screamed at the photo it will never not make me scream i just realized this. and yes amber is forever the cutest why is she not my girlfriend :( ugu
that cafe is a magic place okay MAGIC i tell you. and you did a flawless job on stringing the scenes together! honestly no words. i'm speechless. btw about that rumour about yixing's operation in 2004 what what i think i missed it omfg jumps off the cliff of bad stans. orz.

cries now that i am slightly more coherent. there was a part in the story that reduced me to ugly tears you know :c it was very.. real and so so sad. and i dont know i'm still amazed at you at your existence at your writing at everything omfg. this line:
"He’s tired of this, tired of being the one caught in the middle, and his now-unstable future is making his bad mood even fouler."
sobs. so many feels i can't even begin to describe them.

this story is perfect i won't ever get tired of saying this ;c

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halcyondusk May 27 2012, 08:28:28 UTC
SOBS UGUUUUU the photos is glorious i find myself just stopping and staring because jfc exo. i would like amber to say 'sweeeeeet' to me as well why is this not a reality lul ;;

YIXING'S OPERATION IN 2004 SOBS POOR BABY he has a blood coagulation issue and i was just like bawling http://love-exo.tumblr.com/post/23742698930/translation-lays-coagulation-disorder poor baby. he is so extremely filial though yixing perfect unicorn ;;

always caught in the middle, as the child ;u; i was listening to p!nk's family portrait while i was doing those sections and god p!nk's voice will never not make me cry. bombarded by feels.

HUGS YOU.

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chiharu May 27 2012, 03:49:37 UTC
SPOT THE FUCK OUT OF THIS

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chiharu May 27 2012, 04:40:41 UTC
JFCCCC JO WHY ARE YOU LIKE THIS. YOU ALREADY SAW ME SPAZZ OVER THIS LIVE ON SKYPE fkjds BUT I'LL JUST GIVE YOU THE HIGH LIGHTS-

I haven't seen anyone incorporate so much backstory since Aeris wrote Yixing fic and THAT'S JUST FUCKING RIDICULOUS BECAUSE SHE'S CRAZY ABOUT YIXING AND YOU CAN'T JUST TRUMP THAT (because you kind of did and now she's going to kick my ass for saying so).

Oh yeahhhh. Mama Wu Getting someeee.

And Lazy lazy yixing! I want to room with lazy yixing too, watch him play his guitar and laze around in his boxers ;A; LAZY UNICORN IS THE BEST UNICORN. The part where he stayed by the river with Kris killed me. okay, I may have lost my shit when Yixing was talking about his baidu bar. WHERE IS HIS #1 FAN?? I WANT TO MEET THIS GIRL AND SHAKE HER HAND.

“Hey. Kris. Hang in there.”
See. I thought I already liked Amber, but you just have to write her so flawlessly and make me love her ಥ_ಥ

BEIJING BOY BEIJING BOY. PLEASE BE MY BEIJING BOY, LU HAN. And I love how snarky you make him. “Hey, Laylay, remember, 你蛋疼不?” ( ... )

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halcyondusk May 27 2012, 05:13:04 UTC
I DID INDEED

oh god aeris' yixing fic was just a truckload of fucking feelings though and her minseok one too i mean like FEELINGS FEELINGS HELLO WOW FEELINGS? but yes I HAVE THIS LOVE FOR BACKSTORY and finding explanations for things and i hope it worked out here lul ;u;

kekeke mama wu |D lazy yixing WOULDN'T IT BE GREAT TO ROOM WITH HIM wouldn't it be great if krislayhan roomed together i just love those three l-o-l

THAT GIRL OMG I WAS READING HER FANACC ON WEIBO AND BAWLING idk who she is but she is dedicated ok ad yixing is the dearest more precious unicorn gurgles. gurgles more.

amber SO FLY LIKE A G6 fangirls over krishenber as well english speaking trio yo.

CACKLES MAKES LU HAN A LITTLE SNARKY CUTE THING.

omg that recording thing was sth that actually happened to me except i was just cleaning my room and my message was 14569845687 times lamer l-o-l

OH GOOD I WAS TRYING FOR CLOSURE closure is difficult but lu han is a smarmy ass ilh n__n I ACCEPT YOUR FEELINGS as i cackle about huan zhu ge ge ❤❤❤

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chiharu May 27 2012, 05:48:19 UTC
好像上边的傻瓜已经给你写了一个作文...

我只想说... 我好喜欢你的写作!!!

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