wait i just noticed a tiny change at the end hahahahahahaa this is even better 这时开始 不是最终 DO YOU KNOW HOW SAD I AM THAT THE CANADA APPLE STORE CAN'T ENGRAVE CHINESE jsyk i clearly havne't read this yet but it's you and feelings and FEELINGS
also i read that as test rolls and was like..............................food???????????????
PRECISELY. （天啊 我说这是《艺兴的故事》，可是实际是。。。除了艺兴本人，谁都写不了他的故事 ；--； 因为他就是这世界唯一的张艺兴，每天在追他的梦想创造他自己的未来，他自己的故事。所以我想写也写不出来结局 ；-----；大哭。 啊啊啊希望艺兴的故事没有结局 希望能保持他的微笑 保持他的幸福 保持的好长时间 my chinese is shitty idk what i'm even saying look what you've done to me）
that is a tragedy what were you going to engrave on it? sighs and shoves you actual food.
This was such a beautiful read, I was tearing up throughout because the tone you created has such a nostalgic and emotional feel - it's just so pretty. I loved the dynamics of Yixing, Luhan and Kris' relationship and I honestly just love how you wrote Yixing. He's such a sweet and amazing person and I really think you captured who he is (or how we see him at least lol) ;A;
thank you for reading ;; i have rather overwhelming feelings about trainees and foreign countries and also really, really, really love those three and their dynamics ugh ;_______; ofc we only get what we can from fanaccounts and stuff but yixing just genuinely seems like the sweetest person and ilhsfm ;A;
Okay, I read this days ago and have finally gotten around to commenting ;~; I'M SORRY FOR BEING SO LAZY.
What I loved the most is the contrast between Lu Han and Wu Fan, especially the bit about Wu Fan wanting to grow up fast. And Lu Han trolling everyone. And the conversation with newbie Jongdae! IDC I just have a lot of yixing feels that I cannot coherently articulate so. yah. ilu!!
all good o/ NO ONE GETS LAZIER THAN ME i just bookmark things 'for later' and i forget to do anything about them so now my folder is like......100+ lined up u______u oh dear
YEAH turned out into comparison between the three of them and how they're different but similar and why they find solace in each other i-d-k I LOVE THESE TROLLS I LOVE XINGLU sobs. ilu too.
screams some more. how dare you make me cry omg :c crying jo how is this pointless? it's so fucking beautiful. it might not have one of those complex plots or anything but dAMN IT your words and everything you put in here make up for it. I LOVED YOUR CHARACTERIZATION OF LU HAN. and how you detail yixing's childhood and life back in changsha so so nicely like omg. and omg when i got to sacrifice, i was like no, nononono please no the girl and the songs no ;__; you're making stanning yixing harder than it already is sobs. chokes on her feels tbh too much to handle. omg i'm sorry this comment is nonsense but it's late i should go. i loved it i really did ;_; you're a great writer and god bless your yixing feels.
ROLLS ON YOU ;_______; BABY DON'T CRY....tonight.../sings. eee omg i was just like typing out feelings and feelings and more yixing feelings and then lu han feelings also kicked in and their ridiculousness and bromance and bickering and u___u seriously i was like "jo this is so pointless what even HAPPENS" but i guess this is just more like what i said, a collection of moments, a progression from kid!yixing to present!yixing :3 gurgles
CACKLES LU HAN i just. saaaaam omg they're so adorable together ;____; also there is no way i could not put tears airport I ADMIT I LAUGHED WHEN I FIRST HEARD IT but then lyrics and wow my heart /o/ \o\ i just. have so much respect for her (if the rumour is true 8D).
ILU nonsensical comments are the best i'm nonsensical most of the time anyway :3 ♥
Uhm. I had to like settle all feels first before eventually commenting because that would be sorta wrong if I just leave "alnflljghajsfhghjagkalkfghslkfjsf" all over here.
I really really admire your writing. I think that added the thrill of reading this beautiful piece, and Yixing's character is always so exact when it comes to you. I love everything about this piece, the progression and flow; you really can see Lay growing up and all. There's more to him really, such a bias wrecker too n__n
Ugh LayHan. Their bond in reality is just gorgeous and you highlighted it so well in this fic. Please accept my asjfgajkhfksljksfaafasf ♥ because I'm still stunned omg ;_____; Excuse my pathetic comment.
You are now one of my favorite writers and I'll anticipate your writing for this pairing in the future. :)
;AAAAAAA; keysmashing is so fun though dfklgjsfh;lksjgfh;slgfkjh sighs
thank you so much ;_____; i really adore yixing and because this isn't some really fancy au of course i had to focus on the characterisation and get that right ;u; yixing is the biggest, biggest bias wrecker ever. it's gotten to the stage that i just see his face and feel the need to squeal over it, and making the timeline and discovering all these predebut videos did not help ;A; lol
:') they are bros ahhhh just the little interactions on fancams, lu han playing sword with yixing, playing peekaboo, laughing together with yixing at kris trying to be all suave, UGH i love them ;_; /accepts keysmashes ♥
SOBS NO WHY omg i write like a snail ;; eeeeeek. thank you for reading!
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also i read that as test rolls and was like..............................food???????????????
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that is a tragedy what were you going to engrave on it? sighs and shoves you actual food.
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What I loved the most is the contrast between Lu Han and Wu Fan, especially the bit about Wu Fan wanting to grow up fast. And Lu Han trolling everyone. And the conversation with newbie Jongdae! IDC I just have a lot of yixing feels that I cannot coherently articulate so. yah. ilu!!
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YEAH turned out into comparison between the three of them and how they're different but similar and why they find solace in each other i-d-k I LOVE THESE TROLLS I LOVE XINGLU sobs. ilu too.
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CACKLES LU HAN i just. saaaaam omg they're so adorable together ;____; also there is no way i could not put tears airport I ADMIT I LAUGHED WHEN I FIRST HEARD IT but then lyrics and wow my heart /o/ \o\ i just. have so much respect for her (if the rumour is true 8D).
ILU nonsensical comments are the best i'm nonsensical most of the time anyway :3 ♥
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I really really admire your writing. I think that added the thrill of reading this beautiful piece, and Yixing's character is always so exact when it comes to you. I love everything about this piece, the progression and flow; you really can see Lay growing up and all. There's more to him really, such a bias wrecker too n__n
Ugh LayHan. Their bond in reality is just gorgeous and you highlighted it so well in this fic. Please accept my asjfgajkhfksljksfaafasf ♥ because I'm still stunned omg ;_____; Excuse my pathetic comment.
You are now one of my favorite writers and I'll anticipate your writing for this pairing in the future. :)
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thank you so much ;_____; i really adore yixing and because this isn't some really fancy au of course i had to focus on the characterisation and get that right ;u; yixing is the biggest, biggest bias wrecker ever. it's gotten to the stage that i just see his face and feel the need to squeal over it, and making the timeline and discovering all these predebut videos did not help ;A; lol
:') they are bros ahhhh just the little interactions on fancams, lu han playing sword with yixing, playing peekaboo, laughing together with yixing at kris trying to be all suave, UGH i love them ;_; /accepts keysmashes ♥
SOBS NO WHY omg i write like a snail ;; eeeeeek. thank you for reading!
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