Fic for shocolate: 'John Lennon and the soul of Yoko Ono.'

Nov 23, 2006 13:27

shocolate requested something with Seamus/Neville, Seamus/Ron or Seamus/Ginny, without anything nasty and with anything nice. I did the best I could: there's Seamus/Neville, and Seamus/Ginny friendship, and a major supporting role played by Ron. Many apologies for the lateness, many salutes to kaalee for the extension, many hugs to florahart for the beta, to oconel for the ( Read more... )

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kaalee November 25 2006, 16:43:38 UTC
Oh, well done. ♥

neville and just neville and beatles and seamus and everyhing.

love.

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nothingbutfic November 25 2006, 16:50:31 UTC
eee, thanks! :D

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earthquakedream November 25 2006, 18:48:10 UTC
You!! You are just. Amazing. And soo soo wonderful.

You already know that I love your Seamus, but your Neville was just. Wonderful. Such a sweetheart. I loved him too.

And this: “Harry’s not my boyfriend!” Ron squeaks, and he brushes the fringe from his eyes. “…We just hang round each other a lot. It’s masculine.”

“Sure it is, Ringo,” Seamus snorts, but he’s more exasperated than mean, and Ron shuffles out, probably more confused than when he walked in.

And the shamrocks! Hee.

You, love, are amazing. And I am awed by your talent. *nods*

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nothingbutfic November 25 2006, 23:20:59 UTC
Thank you, m'dear.

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earthquakedream November 26 2006, 02:43:29 UTC
Of course, lovey. Your fic deserves all the praise it gets and much, much more, because you are just that brilliant. Who's the eager fan now?

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wildestranger November 26 2006, 19:00:42 UTC
Lovely fic. I love your narrative style and how you create Neville in this. Also, this line?

“I can’t be artistic and sensitive,” Neville declares in surprise, despite having no idea what he’s talking about. “I’m round.”

Pure comic genius.

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nothingbutfic November 26 2006, 19:54:56 UTC
Thanks! I very rarely write Neville, so I'm happy people I do a Good Job.

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nothingbutfic November 26 2006, 19:55:43 UTC
Thank you!

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john lennon nd the soul of yoko ono ravenpan November 27 2006, 11:14:59 UTC
that was... I have no words for how utterly beautiful that was.

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Re: john lennon nd the soul of yoko ono nothingbutfic November 27 2006, 23:33:51 UTC
thank you!

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