Revelations Cycle First Iteration: No Such Winds Blow Hither

[half_life_wolf]

I was going to work on another thing but then I remembered that I love this idea and I couldn't stop. Please note that everything is intentional. Name changes, tense changes, any and all 'throw away' details; anything that jumps out at you as foreshadowing probably is. In addition, keep in mind that chapter zero was essentially nothing but

Comments

[yuz]

This is amazing. ♥

[half_life_wolf]

Thanks bb~ Always good to hear. ♥

[chainey_clink]

yessss troll!John. I imagine him to be the failest troll ever, but maybe not?

GT: ...oh shit. Seriously John, how could you not see that coming from like eight miles away.

[half_life_wolf]

No that's a pretty spot-on assessment actually.

He's a derp, what can I tell you.

[anonymous]

Oh god yes, this is perfect. I love every single bit of conversation and ever single bit of possible foreshadowing so far. *__* I can't wait to see where you'll be taking this!

[anonymous]

I'm very interested in this, and I hope you continue.

[meted]

fweeeeeeh, I love your writing so much! it is so wonderful. I would love to contribute some art to this if I find the time!! ; u; <3