Revelations Cycle Fourth Iteration: Nor Things Diurnal

Feb 14, 2011 22:36

Thanks so much to everyone who offered name suggestions last chapter! I appreciate it a lot, and now have all my names and shit locked in.

In this chapter: Karlkat goes on an impromptu roadtrip, Nellpeta is worried, and there are some unexpected complications.

I really like how this turned out, actually. About the first chapter I've been really ( Read more... )

sollux/aradia, john/karkat, fics: revelations cycle, fandom: homestuck

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anonymous February 15 2011, 23:33:37 UTC
This is a wonderful thing, and I hope you know that. As much of a cliffhanger that ending is, I don't think there could have been any other better way to end this chapter. *_*

Also! I feel like I should point out one little thing I noticed in the chat log:
AC: :( so you'll play a game with ta but not me?

This particular bit. It's in Karkat's color, instead of Nepeta's. Everything is correctly coded, however. o/

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half_life_wolf February 15 2011, 23:37:07 UTC
Heee. I appreciate it! I was not sure of that, so it's good to hear.

FUUUUUU thank you for pointing that out. Fucking HTML, how does it work? >.>

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chainey_clink March 1 2011, 23:53:05 UTC
AA: if it isnt too much trouble i would like you to kill me

Nnnngh, more trauma heaped on Karl! Huh, calling him Karl is odd. And John's reassurance at the beginning of this wasn't very reassuring, like wow, way to freak Karl out.

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