Revelations Cycle Fifth Iteration: When All Shall Be Gone That Now Lingers

[half_life_wolf]

I tried to make this longer to make up for the fact that updates are likely going to be slow the rest of this week as I deal with RL stuff, but I'm not sure it worked. It just wanted to be broken into chapters where it is, what can I do.

In this chapter: kids and fun! Also flashbacks; that should be the end of them for awhile. By the way, Aradia's

Comments

[walkinganomaly]

This is so epic.
You are so epic.
Just...ohmygog.

You are doing a fantastic job of creating human versions of all the trolls. Their personalities, their back stories, it's all terrific. I am loving how you are using the repetition and flashbacks and all that good stuff to suggest that this that this is so much bigger than it seems. This is a story of epic proportions, and you are pulling it off so perfectly. You win all of the internets. All of them. Forever.

[meted]

omigoshhhhh, this is so exciting! troll!John is the beeeeeest, hahaha. I love him soooo much!! I am going to have to doodle him this weekend. XD <3

[half_life_wolf]

I am all of the excited, man. All of it. Your art is fantastic~ ♥

[meted]

aww thank you!! I will hopefully doodle something up tonight after I finish some homework... if not, this weekend for sure!!

[saramon]

oh my actual god this
this crazy story you are creating
it is practically homestuck-twisty and the amount of thought and backstory that's going on here i am in love with this

[hcb_chibi]

I detect godtier Aradia in the near future and I am so excited.

Although I am ----Excited! in general! :D

[gardenparsley]

IM COMMENTING ON THIS EVEN THOUGH IM PESTERCHUMING YOU ABOUT IT RIGHT NOW

BECAUSE I LOVE YOU

AND I LOVE THIS THING

AND IF YOU EVER STOP IT IM GOING TO I DONT KNOW BUT IT WILL BE HORRIBLE