Revelations Cycle Seventh Iteration: Clothed with Love of Old

[half_life_wolf]

First off, I'm sorry for the delay. I took some time off while we learn a bit more about sburb in canon, but it's seeming like I'm actually going to have to do very little rewriting, so I'm just going to press on with this, because fuck, it's been a month, how did that happen, let's just pretend that I have not been caught in a complete time warp

Comments

[anonymous]

it's "reins"
you steer with "reins"
"reigns" is different

other than that, though? this is ambitious and glorious and i check for updates every day

[half_life_wolf]

Fuck, thanks for correcting me. I always get that wrong.

Glad you're enjoying it despite my grammar fail, though!

fucking. awesome.

[anonymous]

awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome aaaah i love you this is so damn good.

--... Nowhere was there a building, a sign fo Teri's house or a bed like the one Alice had died on, nowhere a...--

you spelled 'of' wrong :p

Re: fucking. awesome.

[half_life_wolf]

nnngh I clearly didn't proof this chapter very well, did I. :| Thanks for informing me, anon, I'll be sure to fix that.

Glad you think it's awesome despite my failure at the English language, though!

[anonymous]

Oh man, this is really, really good. The way you've written these chapters have this forlorn silence about them ...that's the best way I can describe it. And I love it >:]I jumped in my seat in glee when you mentioned there's going to be an Act 2. Because with all the thought you're putting into this, I don't see myself ever losing interest in this. Heck yes! :D

[hcb_chibi]

adsfa;lksdjf;alskdfj;aslkdjf omfg THIS JUST GETS BETTER EVERY TIME

TOTALLY WORTH THE WAIT

/foams at the mouth

approximately 413 bitches flipped.

[anonymous]

Oh man.

Oh man oh man oh man oh man oh man oh man oh man.

All of my love. All of it. Forever. I read this all in a few hours and i already know i'll be F5ing starting tomorrow x'DDDDDDDD
Well, maybe i'll give it about a day...

Maybe. ;]

Re: approximately 413 bitches flipped.

[half_life_wolf]

...oh, dude, thanks for reminding me I have to link the next chapter to this one. SO UH YEAH. CHAPTER 8 EXISTS ALREADY? Sorry about my failure there oh god.

*ahem*

But man, thank you so much! I'm glad you're enjoying it so hard. It makes me happy. ♥