Revelations Cycle Fourteenth Iteration: I Shall Never Be Friends Again With Roses

[half_life_wolf]

I dislike LiveJournal's new post formatting. It worries and distresses me, especially since when I try to go back and edit old posts the formatting gets all fucked to hell.

Whatever!! Powering forward. My goal is to finish this goddamned fic by the end of the year if it kills me but that might not be practical. Let's get on with it.

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Comments

[inverts]

Oh gosh, the last three paragraphs/lines of this chapter just get to me so bad.

I mean, once I am done shaking John and yelling be careful what you wish for. After that, ow, my feelings.

The descriptive imagery in troll!Dave's dream is so amazing. You have a really great way with words and tones and just wow. The conversation between Jade and Dave about his dreams and Rose and all that is also so good, and Rose--and Rose, oh my god. Rose is the best sea witch. And the fish-puns, ahahahah.

And just, man, poor troll!Dave, he is totally lost in between all these crazy ladies and John being obnoxiously oblivious and aaaaw babies, let me just hold them.

[melodiousscheme]

Jawwhn looked down at the box, tossed aside, and then back up at Jadite, standing at Daevid's side, her hand at his shoulder, his hand casually set atop hers. Alone in his thoughts, he had never felt more singular, lost, broken.

Clutching the disk labelled SGRUB to his chest, Jawwhn Egbert wished with all his heart to become whole.

And the universe listened.

I already left a comment on AO3 but FUCK THAT, dear god. You always end these in a way that just hits me. It's like receiving a sudden slap and it hurts so good.

You are so incredibly amazing with words, every sentence brings about such a clear image. It is absolutely mesmerizing. You are the best author, it is you. <3