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[halfassedjew]

On a short break at work I was encased by walls of concrete and sheets of metal fashioned into storage sheds. The air smelt of stagnant water due to poor drainage. There was no grass, just concrete. It was hot and I felt beads of sweat accumulate and roll down my face. And trapped in all of this I looked up and saw the sky with one giant cloud

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[replicantk]

It should be noted that this text you see above (which, I have to say, is absolutely beautiful), was originally posted as a private entry. She wouldn't let me read it at all. In order to read it, she required that I eat one of her toenail clippings. I feel violated, but it was well worth it. When I suggested that it be posted as public, so that others could read it, she required that I write this comment, so that you all may know I ate a friggen toenail just to read it.

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[halfassedjew]

Now, the question is:

Did I post this as an out pouring of my soul or just so I could get Dan to eat one of my toenails?

It may never be answered but I will let you decide for yourselves.

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[replicantk]

My dear,

I love you, but we are so fucking weird.

agreement with the halfassedjew...

[gothicowgirl]

as you can not compaire the beauty of the stars to the shining lights in a city... the beauty of the arora can not be compaired to broken bottles on the ground.. none of the "modern marvels" will ever compair to what nature has already done.. we are all inspired by what nature has done.. and in an attempt to make a peice of nature ours.. we inturn distroy it instead.. the tragidy of it all is that our greed will consume us alive in the end... we are a carless species that cares for nothing more than our selves...
for this my heart cries.. and i feel my soul cry.. with tears of sarrow...