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halighfataliter

Fic: Bathroom realities (FMA)

May 24, 2011 16:18

Title: Bathroom realities
Pairing: RoyEd. Friendship or romance.
Rating: G
Word Count: 250
Summary: Underwater, everything seems wonderfully far away. Even the strongest people need to escape sometimes. (Written for the promt "Fish" at fma_fic_contest )
Warnings: Angst and minor swearing. Also, unbeta-ed.
Disclaimer: I own nothing and I am not making any money by ( Read more... )

Comments 4

nochick_fics June 19 2011, 22:18:14 UTC

Frightening, but in a way almost understandable, the way Roy was so willing to succumb to the water.

I liked this!

(Hope you don't mind, I started reading through your journal after I saw your comments- thank you very much, btw. <3)

halighfataliter June 23 2011, 18:50:24 UTC

Despite what people might think this kind of behaviour or thoughts are not necessarily about committing suicide. I am glad that you liked it and that you understood what I wanted to convey.

And I don't mind at all, although my LJ is not the most exciting ever... ;-)

catw00man July 19 2011, 21:24:33 UTC

Nice!

I have to admit there is this small part of me wanting to beg for more, but I'll tell it to hush because this is great as it is. ;-) Very nicely done. I like how you had him just drifting off without thought, clinging to the nothingness.

Thanks for sharing! :-)

halighfataliter July 28 2011, 20:04:47 UTC

Sorry for the late reply... RL and LJ have teamed up against me :p

Anyway, thank you for the nice fb :) I'm glad you liked this. It was meant to be only a moment in time and it will stay that way, and I'd probably make a mess of it if I were to attempt a sequel. Plus, you know, I have fics for the Slashfest that need to be written and I'm a slow writer...

But thanks for commenting, it is always very encouraging :D