Comments | halighfataliter: Fic: Son Of Byblis (FMA)

halighfataliter

Fic: Son Of Byblis (FMA)

Jul 20, 2011 01:46

“Have you two been fighting or something?”

Alphonse shrugged, sweeping his gaze across Ed’s tiny flat that dusk had painted a brown monochrome. To say it was a bit of a mess would be quite an understatement. Books and empty dishes were spread throughout the room, covering the desk and most of the chairs. Scattered sheets of paper littered the floor ( Read more... )

Comments 9

evilchuckles July 20 2011, 02:04:40 UTC

Wonderful. This was beautiful and sad and aching. Just perfect.

halighfataliter July 21 2011, 08:54:01 UTC

Thank you, that's really sweet. I'm glad you liked it ;-)

kirathaune July 20 2011, 02:33:25 UTC

*sigh* This was beautiful.

And even if I... sometimes, I wish I could melt into you because your touch soothes my soul like nothing else can and it makes me believe in salvation and happiness... THIS. THIS. THIS.

♥

halighfataliter July 21 2011, 08:59:28 UTC

Thank you <3

sexkitten426 July 20 2011, 07:38:07 UTC

That was really touching. I could almost see Ed's eyes filled with heartache with your vivid writing. The kiss at the end was just perfect.

halighfataliter July 21 2011, 09:01:12 UTC

I'm glad you liked it; if you could visualize what I wrote, then I did my job ;-)
Thanks for commenting.

havemy_heart July 22 2011, 06:24:54 UTC

Love this so much. Gorgeous and heartbreaking and just lovely ♥

halighfataliter July 24 2011, 22:53:20 UTC

I'm glad you liked it so much :) Thank you for taking the time to comment.

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halighfataliter October 6 2011, 14:10:54 UTC

Thank you <3