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FIC: Needing a Sign (R/Hr)

Dec 05, 2007 23:01

Author: dumblydore
Requestor: daysandweeksClaim: #54 Hermione's thoughts (or Ron's) around the time of her kiss with Ron during The Battle of Hogwarts ( Read more... )

requestor: daysandweeks, author: dumblydore, character: harry potter, pairing: ron/hermione, character: hermione granger

Comments 9

msmoocow July 21 2008, 16:12:06 UTC

Modly note--omfg, has this been in the queue since December? I profusely apologize if it has! I haven't checked, honestly, since like September of last year. Forgive?

dumblydore July 22 2008, 02:39:40 UTC

Yeah, you lose at modliness. >D I wondered if you'd forgot, but then afterwards I forgot about it myself.

tourdefierce July 21 2008, 18:05:24 UTC

I really loved the moments in the chamber, all awkward and fumbling while trying to save the world.

Well done.

anonymous July 21 2008, 18:08:16 UTC

I love it! This is a sequence of events we didn't get to see in DH, and I think you've done it very well. I really like the way you write Hermione - completely convincing - and I loved this line, "You can let go of me now, Ron," she said gently. And the scene where she stabs the cup, and is transfixed by the images of Lavender and Won-Won, is both gripping and heart-rending.

A great missing moment.

exartemarte July 21 2008, 18:10:23 UTC

Sorry - no idea why that came up as "anonymous" - it was me.

sarcastrow July 21 2008, 20:40:58 UTC

I always believed that the Horcrux would mess with Hermione just as badly as the other one did with Ron. Very nicely done, I appreciate good characterization and continuity, and you did very well. Maintaining Hermione’s character is hard, as I recently discovered, and you did great at that. Ron’s easy by comparison.

dransinha77 July 22 2008, 13:08:36 UTC

I liked Hermione's pov and the cup affecting her as well! You did great with both Hermione and Ron's characters!
Lovely missing moment! :)