Because I love you

May 20, 2007 07:26

Title: Because I love you
Pairing: ???
Genre: Melancholic/angst
Disclaimer: I don't own
A/N: horrible, I know. This is original, but same format of Dreaming of the Rain.

1.
You sit on the edge of your bed. It is cold in your room with the A/C turned up so high. You shiver silently but make no other move to warm yourself. It is bright and sunny outside.

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chodae May 20 2007, 14:28:13 UTC
o-o
You wrote it really well
although the part about the blood and stuff was odd
Thank you for writing though <3

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hallyu May 20 2007, 16:43:13 UTC
haha, the 'blood and stuff' is supposed to be the accident -.-

sankyuu ^^

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hallyu May 20 2007, 16:45:16 UTC
-.~ maybe you're right, maybe you're wrong

.>)

thanx ^^

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m1s7resss May 20 2007, 17:36:09 UTC
This is beautiful. :)♥ I love how you used the weather to set the mood at the end of ever paragraph. :)

mmm, I kept thinking Kyuhyun throughout the entire thing. XD

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hallyu May 20 2007, 17:41:36 UTC
sankyuu ^^ yes, i lov using weather (don't ask, maybe it's a fetish)

hmmm...well...maybe, maybe not -.~



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freefallskyline May 20 2007, 20:48:56 UTC
Reading about the accident makes me sad. >:
But this was nicely written.

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hallyu May 20 2007, 22:13:30 UTC
sankyuu ^^

i kno, reading about the accident makes me want to cry T.T

but it's also a way for me to get over it, you know? (i sound like a therapist or one of those school conselors T.T)

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hallyu May 21 2007, 19:16:45 UTC
ZOMG XD

sankyuuu

(hands you a cookie and takes the ♥♥♥)

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