Hope

Sep 05, 2008 17:54


It gives you a reason to move on with your life
gives you enough courage to complete your goal
make you realize your own importance to yourself
something that strengthens your mind
gives your thoughts a positive look
finds a path for you on a dark night
gives you enough courage to walk on a snowy road
something that represent hot tears falling on ones ( Read more... )

hope

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saccherinepoems September 7 2008, 06:02:55 UTC
honey. this piece is a darling. its short and simple, but it says a lot. i definitely sense "hope" there. keep on writing, hamda! i'll be ur loyal reader.

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hey hamda90 September 7 2008, 17:20:56 UTC
thankx soo much you are making me feel so special already.
actually i wrote like 8 more of them
can you see them
i want you to read them and give me advice on how to improve my writing .
thankx soo much for being a loyal reader
bye bye

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