Comments | hamhocklover: Valentine's Day, Ch 9...Gay Means 'Happy'....Right?

hamhocklover

Valentine's Day, Ch 9...Gay Means 'Happy'....Right?

Dec 01, 2010 06:13

Dave stared blankly into the open refrigerator. His thoughts were jumbled and disorganized. He moved a package of sausage over and pulled out the strawberry jam. He walked to the pantry and grabbed the peanut butter and a loaf of bread. His motions were robotic. He wasn’t thinking about his after-school snack. He was thinking about what he would ( Read more... )

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kalliasgrimm December 1 2010, 17:20:41 UTC

Can't wait to read more!

hamhocklover December 1 2010, 18:56:39 UTC

Thanks....I can't wait to write more. These double shifts at work are getting in the way of my drivel...lol.

tyhyin December 2 2010, 17:14:31 UTC

I FOUND THEM! I just read these all in one go whilst making my brothers Christmas present. I love it. Your Dave is so cute. I love the nicknames he comes up with. I want my own Dave :(.

PROM NEXT! MOAR!.

hamhocklover December 2 2010, 18:03:07 UTC

Thanks!! Sweet! So glad you liked them. Ya know, sometimes I sit and read them all in one go too....lol!!

I love writing Dave as happy and confident. His coming out story is alot like mine. Once he realizes its not about anyone else, he can really just be himself and let those around him accept it or not. I just wish I had screen shots of of my own fic of his smile!!! Sweet sexy smiling Dave!

tyhyin December 2 2010, 18:13:03 UTC

Yeah I liked that. I never thought of that when I came out. Its no bodies business but 'ours' (little Brokeback moment for you). I was brave without having to try. People asked and I just didn't deny it.

Dave'll look so sexy in a Tux.

:D

sweetwaterpink December 2 2010, 22:17:03 UTC

I love Lauren! I can't wait until she meets Kurt.

hamhocklover December 3 2010, 06:26:26 UTC

I love Lauren too! I hope Glee gives Karofsky a sibling/siblings. The idea of being an only-child is sad to me, probably cause I had three sibs and I have 4 children of my own. The larger family dynamic is so much healthier, imo. But maybe that's just us.

Anyway, she's cute....I liked writing her as a confused/neglected little sister who misses the way her big brother used to be....until she realizes he's back and she couldn't be happier. Her world is put back into place right along with Dave's.

Thanks for reading, it means so much!!

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hamhocklover December 7 2010, 01:32:59 UTC

Thank you so much! You have no idea how much that means to me. I started on the finale, but its harder to write than all the previous chapters and I am getting really frustrated.

To cure my writers block, I started on 2 other storylines, back in 5th grade and then way into the future. But I always go back and re-write or change a scene from chapter 10. It maybe be up by Wed night.

Thanks again for reading!!