One Unselfish Wish

Dec 17, 2010 23:20

Why were things so fucked up? He forgot what normal felt like. This dull aching in his stomach, his shoulders. His whole body. He just hurt. At first he thought it was the result of an intense workout. He did hit the weights a lot more now. Pushing himself, punishing himself. But now, the pain was constant. And the emptiness was crushing his will ( Read more... )

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AW! teamk December 18 2010, 04:38:19 UTC
Such adorable!!!!!!! At first when I heard you were going to write about arson, I was like.. o_O?!?! ......hahaha
But now, I'm grinning like a fool cause I'm in love with this ff.
The thinking about arson.......is just Dave Karofsky... ;) And I love Kurt's reaction to it!
One more great job, hamhocklover!

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Re: AW! hamhocklover December 18 2010, 04:45:37 UTC
Thanks! You know I couldn't have a dark and dangerous Dave without a happy ending. I FREAKIN LOVE HAPPY ENDINGS! The idea pops in his head and he's desperate enough to think it'll work. He just wants Kurt back....awww.

Thanks for reading!

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believethis6 December 18 2010, 05:13:06 UTC
Yeah, I'm definitely in love with you. lol That was amazing. Great job.

Favorite part:

“I was going to burn down your school.” Dave answered without emotion.

“I’m sorry, what?” Kurt blinked.

HAHAHA

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hamhocklover December 18 2010, 05:21:04 UTC
Thanks!! That's my fave too. Glad you liked it, you guys inspire some great writing, thank you!

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xephia December 18 2010, 06:57:33 UTC
YOU ARE AMAZING
I am so jealous of how well you write dialog ;u;

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hamhocklover December 18 2010, 13:02:32 UTC
Aww. Don't be jealous...I'm writing for you, Xee, you and all my fellow Kurtofsky fans. I want it to be worthy of your time in reading it!!

Thanks for reading, lol. You're the best!

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beckiemeg December 18 2010, 13:19:07 UTC
:D SO CUTE! glad he did not commit arson in the end. the way he justifyed it was amusing though.

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hamhocklover December 18 2010, 16:01:30 UTC
Thanks. It started as a comment, the school burning down. Then a thought....Karofsky starting the fire....but I knew he wouldn't go through with it. Seeing Kurt staring into the fountain, that changed his mind. He knew he had a chance to see him again, that's all he wanted after all.

Thanks for reading!!!

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attemptedlink December 18 2010, 18:00:46 UTC
Squee.

I'm glad I only inspired attempted arson. XD

I hope you didn't take offence at the fact that I said it may be fuel for the haters, I just thought they'd focus more on the arson than anything else.

Sorry.

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hamhocklover December 18 2010, 22:34:55 UTC
No, no problem! I knew as soon as the idea popped in my head that he wouldn't go thru with it. I HamHockLover-ized it, lol, making it a lil angsty and lil fluffy and just the right amount of possible future KurtofskyLove!!

Thanks for reading, I'm glad you liked it!!

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