15minuteficlets - Challenge, JetxSpike

Aug 07, 2005 11:10

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rosehiptea August 7 2005, 02:16:00 UTC
Wow, that's great. I love the characterization, and I especially like the conclusion.

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hammerxsword August 7 2005, 02:26:51 UTC
Aw, thanks. :-D

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dislex1a August 7 2005, 02:52:51 UTC
Oh this is very well done! You capture the wistful tone of Jet so magnificently. I don't even know the fandom but you had me going 'aww' at the end.

Risky, but careful.
That's my favourite. It's a brilliant line!

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hammerxsword August 7 2005, 03:03:20 UTC
Thanks! Yes, dear old Jet is wistful. To his detriment, unfortunately. Poor Jet. :-(

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anonymous October 14 2007, 04:40:47 UTC
I love yaoi between these two. I think it was really good.

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hammerxsword October 14 2007, 10:48:07 UTC
Thank you! Thanks particularly for reading even after it's been so long since I posted it.

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