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hammiexsquirrel

Philander [Chapter 8]

Sep 05, 2010 10:01

Author: Ani
Genre: AU, romance
Rating: PG-13 for mentions of sex
Pairing: Chiitaro, Takayama, Okajima
Word Count: 1603
Summary: In which Ryutaro is working as a host and Chinen's sister winds up with an unfair debt.
Disclaimer: I don't own JE

( The Problem )

fanfiction: multi-chapter, yamada ryosuke, series: philander, oc: rina, morimoto ryutaro, chinen yuuri, nakajima yuuto, p: okajima, p: takayama, p: chiitaro, okamoto keito, takaki yuya

Comments 156

aoisoranohikari September 5 2010, 17:13:24 UTC

Spotted

aoisoranohikari September 5 2010, 17:21:37 UTC

OH NOOO!!! Chinen criesd!!! (T T) Make me wanna cry as well!!! Huweee!!!!
GDI Ryutaro~!
Owhh! As I thought it'll be TakaYama and OkaJima! XD
ROFL They're debating about sex! LOL
NEXT PLEASE~!!! XD

hammiexsquirrel September 7 2010, 01:16:47 UTC

Chii always cries XD

Yup, Takayama and Okajima so not original at all

Well, they're adolescent boys! With err...raging hormones? XD

erikaoi September 5 2010, 17:45:14 UTC

And thats what I mean behave.ryu will become cold and meanie and make chii sad there but then when he’s alone with chii,he molest chii.so poor chii and he got no one to cheer him up.
this chapter make me cry

hammiexsquirrel September 7 2010, 01:17:31 UTC

haha, I like the way you word that >3333333333333333 It's half close though

D: I'm sorry

lovetoosweet September 5 2010, 18:41:36 UTC

SPOT :D BACK :D
Will comment after reading LATERRRRRRRRRRRR XDDDD

lovetoosweet September 6 2010, 00:02:57 UTC

"If you're not going to do anything, why don't you go away?" Ryutaro asked after a while. "
I HATE YOU RYUTARO D: yeah Chinen, go to Yuto! kinda Yuto biased today D:

Without another word, Chinen turned on his heels and left. But instead of going to Yuuto, he went up to the second floor restroom so no one would interrupt him while he cried.
WHY IS IT THAT IT'S ALWAYS CHINEN WHO CRIES? *pats the squirrel on the back* Nah, don't cry cause you need tears for my fic

DAMN I CAN'T COMMENT PROPERLY (reason posted in my journal, but hey, who cares right?) I WILL COMMENT PROPERLY AND LONGER WHEN I GET MY BRAIN TO WORK AGAIN D:

hammiexsquirrel September 7 2010, 01:19:34 UTC

I HATE YOUR IDIOTKID!RYUTARO D: You made me realize Daichii IS cute XD

WHY NOT? CHINEN NEEDS TEARS HERE TOO! to guilt Ryutaro But I look forward to his tears in your fic :D

lmao, I read about it xD

lovetoosweet September 7 2010, 01:26:23 UTC

AND I HATE COLD!RYUTARO D:< HAHAHAHA THAT's CAUSE HE IS XDDD

Okay, MORE TEARS CHINEN TO GUILT RYUTARO FOR MORE FLUFFY KISSES AND MAKING OUT AND--

I'm still incoherent D:

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hammiexsquirrel September 7 2010, 01:30:35 UTC

I have to agree. But it was also very cute and amusing XD

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loufa9x September 5 2010, 20:02:53 UTC

TakaYama!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *bouncing around the house* Oh em gee just imagining Takaki as a host is just so.... eff-ing HOT!

"How come Yama-chan gets to have sex but not me?" >> ok I'm getting confused here, wth Yuto-kun? *rotfl*

Ryutaro you made Chinen cry why would you *glare* how could you *starts throwing things* *find a pointy object*

hammiexsquirrel September 7 2010, 01:38:22 UTC

haha yes! Takaki suits the image of a host, so yeah XD I say Ryutaro's hotter

Yuuto....is weird XD He thinks it's unfair Yamada gets to have sex with Takaki and then Keito kept telling him no XD

Well, Chinen had to angst and emo before getting together with Ryutaro :D