Tug of War

[hamsterhen89]

title: tug of war

pairing: sehun/jongin, suho/jongin, sehun/luhan, luhan/jongin

summary: jongin is like a ship in a choppy ocean, the waves constantly ramming against him and all he can do is struggle to stay afloat as he breathes, sleeps and dreams of sehun.

rating: pg

notes: this is a fic for my beloved captain-nim, daseotbyul <3 we sail together

Comments

[xfragments]

wow this is so gorgeous! sehun's a dick, poor jongin. love the way you characterized everyone, especially sehun. not many authors write him like you did.

[hamsterhen89]

ah thank you ~ haha most authors write jongin as the jerk and dick. but i can't really see him that way :( oh, that's the best compliment ever! i'm glad you liked the characterisation ;w; thank you for the lovely comment!

late late laaaate ;;

[moonkissedx]

asldkfdj poor jonginnie ;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;; i really liked the characterisation because you showed how shy jongin was and how passionate he was and just everything i imagine jongin to be like. sobs and the sukai really. it was a little understated but i really loved the way you fitted back that small piece of their relationship inside the story.

also, sehun. /sehun/ :( to me he'll always be that cute aegyo-y boy heh but i think the way you wrote him fitted really well in the story because it brought out more of jongin's character and personality.

overall it was a really good fic i really liked it thank you for writing it for me my dearest co-captain ;; love you many many /makes awkward jongin-style hearts ♥

Re: late late laaaate ;;

[hamsterhen89]

oh, long comment from captain-nim! well, we've talked and spazzed about jongin long enough that we both agree that this is how we imagine jongin to be and kai is the opposite because he's the stage persona and stuff. sorry for understating the sukai although i'm glad you liked the little snippet of it at the end!

i spoiled sehun for you ;; haha, i kind of imagined him to be a little darker than what he is idk why. my brain is weird but yay~ you liked him in the fic 0/

there's no need to thank me for writing for you <3 i like writing for you! love you many many too ♥ /makes jongin-style hearts back at you