hehehehe "Because this morning when I destroyed the toaster oven, you didn't freak out. You hugged me and kissed my forehead and told me that today we'd start my cooking lessons. You were more worried about me than the toaster oven. When I broke the switch on Ogata's toaster he practically kicked me out of his house... and we hadn't even played go yet!"
Cuuute and you got me worshipping you alongside svz_insanity XDXDxDXDXD
This was a very well-put comment... one that I'm quite proud to have inspired. You've obviously put some thought into my Akira and where this story is taking him, and I appreciate that more than I know how to express. The latest part (11) deals a bit more with these issues. ^_^
I learned a long time ago that the biggest difference between written art and literature was how many people could understand it. I could easily use a whole lot of words with obscure definitions, but that's going to knock enjoyment out of anyone reading who doesn't know what those words mean. I have no qualms about using go terms because they're not significant, and when they are, I explain them.
I'm glad you liked this again, and once more you're making me smile like a moron after having read your comments. Thank you!
They caught at the ends of his hair and Akira's thumbs stroked along his jaw even as he opened his mouth and took Akira inside, feeling the heated throb of him along his tongue.
This sentence feels like Akira is doing interesting things to Akira. Other than that, well done!
"Where did you learn?" There was a hint of something in Akira's voice that, to Hikaru, hinted at jealousy
"No. I... I don't think you're ready yet." Hikaru let the hands fall to his sides, each clutching one apron.
The above statements showed that Hikaru really "read" Akira very well and he is extremely careful with Akira...when Hikaru make this statement => "...Just so I don't think I'm going to break you."... i got the feeling Hikaru mean more than just in the context of Akira been skinny and breakable...maybe i thinking too much into it... :P
Can't helped feeling sorry and sad for Hikaru for being so patient with Akira... guess that is the power of love... [Sighs] my heart goes out for Hikaru (this is the 1st time, i'm feeling down after reading a smut fic. i guess i'm in a weird mood tonite...sorry about this half-decent comment. Seriously considering not posting this at all, you deserved better...)
Anyway, i am waiting for more "actions" in the coming chapter [Grins]
No, no... this comment was perfectly fine. ^_^ I liked what you had to say. I am amazed that I've managed to create a sympathetic character in all of this, and even moreso amazed that you recognized it. ^_^
Part 11 doesn't have any more action, but more will be coming soon. ^_^
Thank you for commenting again. I really like your comments, no matter what you think of them.
you are too polite... :) i actually come back here thinking of deleting the comment... hoping that i didn't embarrassed myself too much by my nonsensical rambling :P
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"Because this morning when I destroyed the toaster oven, you didn't freak out. You hugged me and kissed my forehead and told me that today we'd start my cooking lessons. You were more worried about me than the toaster oven. When I broke the switch on Ogata's toaster he practically kicked me out of his house... and we hadn't even played go yet!"
Cuuute and you got me worshipping you alongside svz_insanity XDXDxDXDXD
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I'm incoherent. XDDDDDDDDDD
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I learned a long time ago that the biggest difference between written art and literature was how many people could understand it. I could easily use a whole lot of words with obscure definitions, but that's going to knock enjoyment out of anyone reading who doesn't know what those words mean. I have no qualms about using go terms because they're not significant, and when they are, I explain them.
I'm glad you liked this again, and once more you're making me smile like a moron after having read your comments. Thank you!
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This sentence feels like Akira is doing interesting things to Akira. Other than that, well done!
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"No. I... I don't think you're ready yet." Hikaru let the hands fall to his sides, each clutching one apron.
The above statements showed that Hikaru really "read" Akira very well and he is extremely careful with Akira...when Hikaru make this statement => "...Just so I don't think I'm going to break you."... i got the feeling Hikaru mean more than just in the context of Akira been skinny and breakable...maybe i thinking too much into it... :P
Can't helped feeling sorry and sad for Hikaru for being so patient with Akira... guess that is the power of love... [Sighs] my heart goes out for Hikaru (this is the 1st time, i'm feeling down after reading a smut fic. i guess i'm in a weird mood tonite...sorry about this half-decent comment. Seriously considering not posting this at all, you deserved better...)
Anyway, i am waiting for more "actions" in the coming chapter [Grins]
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Part 11 doesn't have any more action, but more will be coming soon. ^_^
Thank you for commenting again. I really like your comments, no matter what you think of them.
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