Wonderful chapter as always. *-* And yay you have a goldfish named Atobe!! XD
It's quite sweet how they are actually engaged and have the rings to prove it. XD It just makes their relationship that much deeper. ^^ Poor Ogata. XD Although, sex with a minor does seem like a logical way for him to be arrested. ;) (Or maybe drinking and driving. XD)
I didn't find any typos! Amazing! I wasn't really looking for them, but usually I notice them anyway. I didn't see any. (I know, I still need to tell you what the ones were in the last chapter. I'm writing some Hikago smut though, so I'm sure you'll forgive me. ^.~)
I almost thought there was going to be a fight. But then, I can see Hikaru just forgetting about it the next day. Very cute stuff.
"Isn't it obvious? You made me love you."
I am so dead from this line. XD
Akira blushed. "Now, Hikaru, you know I'm for dessert."
Then you killed me more with this one. I'll be down for a while. Don't mind me.
This one actually got to have a few read-throughs because I kept wanting to add stuff in here and there, so I managed to catch it all (I think). [Also... yay! Hikago smut!]
I couldn't have them fight. Akira would be devasted and would react more strongly than he intended which would leave Hikaru upset, and that's a goke I don't want to fish a stone from. (I am wayyyyyy too Hikago-obsessed.)
I'm glad you liked those lines. They were a whole lot of fun for me to write, as well. ^_^
*prepare jar in advance to catch brain before reading* ^_^ May 5th??? Hehe then Hikaru would be verrryyy busy every year what with going to Shusaku's grave and preparing something for Akira LOL. I can imagine
H: Here's some flower for you A: Hikaru, this is flower for dead people!! H: *scratch head* oops it got mixed up *hides*
wow i cant wait to read about what exactly happened to ogata IF you write about it lol. i SO wanna know what Akira is gonna say when hikaru finally tells him about sai lol. i can just see waya and co. along with akari and the rest of his old friends faces when they see the Announcement lol. thats gotta be a shocker for akari and co. lol. wonderful work ^__^ keep it up.
*grin* Yay! I made you comment! *dances* Glad you liked that. I have every intention of one day writing a fic where Ogata gets exactly what he deserves... and may do that tomorrow just because I'm off from work.
Also, I know you worked Waldenbooks tonight, but in case you didn't see it, Level C 3 was on the shelf... I meant to ask them if they'd put one aside for you but got distracted. >_< And, I need to order Yellow, and the latest 2 Banana Fish volumes! Argh!
Yeah, me too. And Antique Bakery. I did pick up Level C though.
I'm full of holes now because I got three shots today. The lady giving me the shots made fun of me because I wouldn't watch her give me the shot. It doesn't hurt as much if I don't watch!
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It's quite sweet how they are actually engaged and have the rings to prove it. XD It just makes their relationship that much deeper. ^^
Poor Ogata. XD Although, sex with a minor does seem like a logical way for him to be arrested. ;) (Or maybe drinking and driving. XD)
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I almost thought there was going to be a fight. But then, I can see Hikaru just forgetting about it the next day. Very cute stuff.
"Isn't it obvious? You made me love you."
I am so dead from this line. XD
Akira blushed. "Now, Hikaru, you know I'm for dessert."
Then you killed me more with this one. I'll be down for a while. Don't mind me.
<3
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I couldn't have them fight. Akira would be devasted and would react more strongly than he intended which would leave Hikaru upset, and that's a goke I don't want to fish a stone from. (I am wayyyyyy too Hikago-obsessed.)
I'm glad you liked those lines. They were a whole lot of fun for me to write, as well. ^_^
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May 5th???
Hehe then Hikaru would be verrryyy busy every year what with going to Shusaku's grave and preparing something for Akira LOL. I can imagine
H: Here's some flower for you
A: Hikaru, this is flower for dead people!!
H: *scratch head* oops it got mixed up
*hides*
Nice.. and re:Ogata, oh man *chuckle
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That little scenario made me laugh my head off. ^_^
And, yes, Ogata. The poor man! He just can't keep his hands off the little ones.
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With all those pervy looks he gave Akira in the series, it's good he's finally punished. ^_^
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Also, I know you worked Waldenbooks tonight, but in case you didn't see it, Level C 3 was on the shelf... I meant to ask them if they'd put one aside for you but got distracted. >_< And, I need to order Yellow, and the latest 2 Banana Fish volumes! Argh!
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I'm full of holes now because I got three shots today. The lady giving me the shots made fun of me because I wouldn't watch her give me the shot. It doesn't hurt as much if I don't watch!
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