[HnG] Momentum (PG) [Impatience arc Part 15 - The End]

Aug 09, 2005 10:02

Title: Momentum ( Read more... )

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jgal87 August 9 2005, 14:08:48 UTC
XDDD nice ending XD I loved it xD

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mmmdraco August 10 2005, 03:54:33 UTC
Thanks for the nice comments throughout!

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hostilecrayon August 9 2005, 14:37:14 UTC
Mmm, Kawaii, as usual. Such a lovely way to end the series. (Though I can't say I don't hope inspiration strikes you somewhere down the road for a Hikaru-Tells-Akira-About-Sai piece.)

Beautiful, flawless again, which always says something.

"The day that I met Touya Akira, I thought 'Hey, it's a kid my age in a go salon, maybe I can play him instead of some old geezer'. What I didn't realize was that beneath the child-like exterior, he was already an old geezer."

I almost died for real here. I was eating, and it almost ended up everywhere, including lodged in my throat. ^.~

But all in all, this entire fic is just *dies* in general, and I hope to see more AkiHika/HikaAki coming from you, as your style is something I definately love.

Also, just a sidenote you might like, i just spent the last 5 hours reading Hikago fics, and none of them excite me like this one. You should feel accomplished. ^.^;

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mmmdraco August 10 2005, 02:58:31 UTC
I've already done one Hikaru-Tells-Akira-About-Sai piece... Names. If I do another, it'll be vastly different, though I'm not certain I want to do one for this universe... perhaps a side-fic from afterward, though...

The flawlessness surprises me here as I didn't look over it *at all* before posting. But, the entire time I was writing it, I was being careful because I didn't want to screw up the final part. ^_^

I'm certified in emergency first aid, so I'll be happy to provide the Heimlich. *grin*

I definitely want to write more of this pairing because I really adore writing about them. They've grown on me tremendously to the point that I make at least one obscure go-related reference per day now. ^_^ But, I'm also a dork...

That makes me feel loved. *grin* So, thank you... for all of the catching of my mistakes, and the dying about certain lines, and for reading and commenting in general, and just... everything. Thank you. ^_^

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hostilecrayon August 10 2005, 06:50:00 UTC
Names? Wow, I read that! I didn't know that was you. You have two different names, it confuses me. ^.^;

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ramble_corner August 9 2005, 14:42:15 UTC
aah the awaited Happy Ending to this arc ^_^.
(Other not so quiet things waited until Akari and Hikaru's mother had gone home... except for that one time.) Hehe boys*

*goes off to wipe tear discreetly at the wedding speechs
I'm gonna miss your boys unless you got one more arc planned out *cough . But for now they deserve this moment of happiness
*throw confetti at you to celebrate end of fic*

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mmmdraco August 10 2005, 03:01:12 UTC
Could it have anything other than a happy ending? ^_^

I'm going to miss writing them every day, but I will almost definitely come back to write at least one more actual fic for this arc, perhaps a first-anniversary special or something. ^_^

*treats the confetti like falling sakura petals* Thank you for the fabulous reccing and reviewing and all of that. It is much appreciated, and a whole lot of fun.

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svz_insanity August 9 2005, 15:13:24 UTC
(Other not so quiet things waited until Akari and Hikaru's mother had gone home... except for that one time)

*sputters at Waya's thoughts* Oh dear.

And I love the comment about opening a new Go Salon and Touya's apology to his head. <33

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mmmdraco August 10 2005, 03:06:34 UTC
^_^ I'm glad you enjoyed this. Thank you so much for supporting me through it! I don't know that it would have even gone on this long if I hadn't been able to taunt you with smut and a happy ending. *glomps* Thank you!!!!!!!

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svz_insanity August 10 2005, 03:32:41 UTC
*to his dad.

Oh god. I CAN NOT type in the morning. (This is the second mistake I've caught on one of my comments- in the past half an hour!)

*hugs* I'm so happy to have talked to you so much. ^^ You've helped me expand on a lot of my writing and this AkiHika arc has made my day more than a few times.

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divinepocky August 9 2005, 15:49:56 UTC
The match going on between Hikaru and Akira was world-class. Both men had played a lot of games in their lives, but were now going above and beyond all of that with a game that had brought a tear to Touya Kouyo's eye... something his son's wedding hadn't even done.

LoL!!!! Such a typical response from Touya Kouyo...

Aww at last, everything must start with and end with Sai. It's such a sweet wedding present.

Oh, and Isumi should just tell Waya to move in with him.

Love this story. You finished it so quickly too!! I remember when I first started stalking you... *nods*

<3 <3 <3 Anything for me to look for in the future?

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mmmdraco August 10 2005, 03:27:02 UTC
I am still uncomfortable with writing Akira's dad... but I can see him doing this. ^_^

Sai is such an integral part of Hikaru's life even after he's gone... I had to throw that in there. It was one of the things I was planning as soon as the end of this fic was in sight.

I may write a Waya/Isumi fic in this series. It keeps asking for it. ^_^

When I'm in the mood to write, I write. This story was just compelling for me to write, so I kept at it until, finally, it seemed like I didn't need to write any more of it... for now.

I am planning a one-year anniversary fic in this, and possibly a Waya/Isumi as well. I have several Prince of Tennis fics on the burner... and a yuri Fushigi Yuugi piece in the back of my head. Lately I haven't gone more than a week or so without writing something, so just keep an eye out. ^_^

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