[HnG] Momentum (PG) [Impatience arc Part 15 - The End]

Aug 09, 2005 10:02

Title: Momentum ( Read more... )

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issen4 August 10 2005, 01:00:45 UTC
Ah. NIIIICE ending, sorry for caps. Very sweet.

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mmmdraco August 10 2005, 03:44:51 UTC
Caps are always much appreciated when used for emphasis. ^_^ Thank you for commenting, especially for doing it many times.

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tiara_hikari August 10 2005, 01:08:50 UTC
OH MY GOD. The whole Sai thing at the end, and everything, it's just..... almost tear-inducing and it's so great! Awww~!!

Akira couldn't quite decipher the smile that came to Hikaru's lips as he said, "You already have."

I love that line, it just promises and means so much!

Sad to see it end, but it's such a perfect ending, I love the whole series!! *adds to memories*

Everything fell into place naturally, from the way they came together, to the way they resolved everything and grew up to this point. They were both adorably in character, all the little details just spiced it up and made it that much more interesting, it was adorable! Much love for the story! You are such an awesome writer! *stalks fangirls you XD*

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mmmdraco August 10 2005, 03:50:14 UTC
I teared up as I was writing this, and not just because I'm a bit sad to stop writing it.

Thank you for all of the nice comments. ^_^ I wanted to reply to all of them, but my time is in short supply.

I do have a few more Hikago fics in the memories for my fic journal if you feel like looking... along with my other stuff... Prince of Tennis, Fruits Basket, Harry Potter... I don't know what else you read, so I'm just tossing stuff out there. ^_^

Thanks again, and I hope to hear from you again the next time I post a Hikago fic. *grin

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tiara_hikari August 10 2005, 18:48:01 UTC
Ooo I shall definitely look through your other fics.. I read Fruits Basket, and Harry Potter, but haven't seen Prince of Tennis XD

I'll definitely be looking out for more of your Hikago fics ^^

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kagomegirl August 10 2005, 01:38:05 UTC
awwww so sweet i have enjoyed this arc so much as it showed what could happen in a real life setting as we watched the two bishounen grow and love. it was wonderful how you pictured them and captured each personality perfectly. ownderful job and i do hope to read more of your work in the future. thanks again ^_^ i loved every minute of it.

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mmmdraco August 10 2005, 03:52:11 UTC
Thank you for continuing to comment on this. ^_^ I hope to write some more soon, so keep an eye out for me. *grin*

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kagomegirl August 11 2005, 04:46:24 UTC
you can be sure i will ^_~

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kagomegirl August 11 2005, 04:50:06 UTC
oh yea hehe i was wonderin ^^;; umm which one took who's last name? hehehe if they got married one of them has to have the other's last name. if Akira was the 'girl' in the wedding did he take hikaru's last name fully or hyphinate it hehee gomen stupid question i know ^^;;

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felys_sho August 10 2005, 03:34:08 UTC
*wipes tear* This arc has been unbelievably beautiful. *-* The wedding and the Sai part at the end just made it such a Happy Ending. X3

Akira was expecting Ogata to break from prison to try to stop it
XD!!!! It was probably a good thing he was arrested then... Oo;;

Thank you for such a wonderful series!! *__*

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mmmdraco August 10 2005, 03:53:44 UTC
Good... Touya Kouyo and I aren't the only ones who cried. ^_^ I had to make it a happy ending here... only the best for Hikaru and Akira. *grin*

Ogata's just getting his just desserts. Besides, there's a chance he'll *like* prison.

Thank you for the comments!

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anonymous June 18 2006, 16:59:55 UTC
I'm so glad I found this here! I've started reading HnG fanfiction recently and I saw this fic recommended a couple of times, but all the links led to the Jumpy Boys archive, which no longer seems to be working. I finally tracked it down here, and I'm glad I did :)

-Tanya

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