[PoT] Sonnets: Ethereal (TezuRyo) and Clinical (InuKai) (PG-13)

[hanahadauncute]

Title: Sonnets: Ethereal (TezuRyo) and Clinical (InuKai

Comments

[chastity_rowan]

ASDKLDSFJF!!!!

Your poems are sexy~!! I think I'll put them in my memories to remind me that I suck at the genre XDD

[mmmdraco]

Poetry and I are like the enemies who every now and again get together because they realize they're being silly, and then get angry and stomp out again. I usually say that I hate writing poetry, and unless I'm in the mood to write it, I'll say I suck. But, sonnets? I have a love affair with sonnets, and Shakespearean writing in general, so this is okay. ^_^ I'm glad you liked them. Sonnets present a particular difficultly in that the rhyme scheme can sound absolutely forced unless you're willing to split a sentence in a single line here and there so that it reads better. I wanted to write less sex for these, but I was in a smut mood. ^_^ Thanks again!

O_O

[chastity_rowan]

I never expected such a long reply for such a short comment ^^;

Well I never deleved much in the genre because my lame attempts have been either ridiculed for redundancy or their hard copies ripped to shreds. *sigh* They all hate me... literature XD

And my god, you should really make more of these~! They can be easily inserted in my busy schedule! HUZAAH!^_^

Re: O_O

[mmmdraco]

What can I say? I ramble. ^_

[svz_insanity]

Your sonnets are gorgeous. <33 I love the imagery, and the word choice. *fangirls* AND

[svz_insanity]

.... MY COMMENT GOT CUT OFF! :0

*coughs* .... AND THE SONNETS ARE PARTIALLY BLAMED ON ME! YAY!

I love how smooth and ethereal the TezuRyo one is, and how straight-to-the-point, sexy, down-to-earth (you wrote sex by the Bunsen burner! Oh my god, I love you!) the InuKai one is. <33

[mmmdraco]

*dances* Sex by the Bunsen burner... is that almost like paradise by the dashboard light?

I love you too! *glomps* And, thanks again for commenting. ^_^ You're so good to me!

[darkeyedwolf]

Sonnets. PoT sonnets. You are so my new hero!

[mmmdraco]

*puts on a cape to play the hero part better* I figured that dirty limericks just wouldn't have the same effect. ^_~ Thanks!

[kishmet]

These sonnets are gorgeous, they really are. I love seeing good PoT poetry, and these are probably the best I've ever seen! Beautiful imagery!!

[mmmdraco]

*blush* Thank you. I'm always iffy about my poetry, at best, so it's especially nice to hear such wonderful things about it. *dances*

[airairo]

Absolutely beautiful. I wish there was more for me to say, but I'm just speechless. *memories*

[mmmdraco]

That's enough of a comment for me. *grin* Thank you!