New fic: In Their Love (continued)

[hanakage]

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Comments

[ketsudan]

T-that... THAT WAS JUST AWESOME.
POST IT ON NAMIKAZE AI. POST IT NOW.

That was just such an... amazing thing to read. I am breathless and speachless and just blown away. The mix of angst and subtle hints of romance, and just the way you mixed and matched everything and then the whole funeral not being what we thought it was in the first part and...

If this doesn't win the contest, then we're idiots.

Thank you so much for posting such a wonderful fanfic. I am sure that anyone who reads this would love it.

[hanakage]

Oh my. *BLUSH*

Thank you so much! I...I don't really know what to say. ^___^' I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

[ketsudan]

Welcomes! *hugs* I really did enjoy it.

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[ketsudan]

I can't reply directly to the story so hopefully this works.

Ummm this just took my breath away!

Now I don't need to read the manga anymore lol, achingly beautiful and I love the nuances of Naruto and Sasuke's relationship!

Wow!

[maplepie_tree]

At first, I almost passed this link by, thinking that it'd be just another ordinary, cliche "Sasuke attacks Konoha and dies" fic. Now I'm glad I decided to click, because I've never wanted to cry so hard in my life right now.

You said this was an experimental style, but with the way you write, this could become your forte! The flow is smoothe and strong, and the words you use are powerful. I especially love the metaphor of Sasuke's "death" as the key to his new "life". I hope that one day in the manga, Sakura gets to see them all standing shoulder to shoulder again.

Another good song to go with this would be Adele's Chasing Pavements. I listened to it the entire time I read, and started sobbing. *embarrassed*

[hanakage]

*hands you a tissue*

Thank you so much! I'm truly touched that you had such an emotional response to this. :]

[hanakage]

All I can say is "wow"-- thank you so much for your kind, encouraging words! ^___^'

(I'm glad you think the action scenes were good. Those are what worried me most, as I've never written action scenes for the Narutoverse.)

[gonrie]

I really, really liked this!
Hope to see more from you because it was just perfect

[hanakage]

Thank you-- I'm very glad that you liked it! ^_^

[hanakage]

Wow, thank you! :D

YESYESYES THANK YOU FOR PICKING UP ON THAT! I was worried that people wouldn't understood what I was trying to say with that.

Thank you very much for this kind review; I'm so glad that you enjoyed it!