T&T Fanfic!!
I wrote this fanfic some day ago but I was still a beginner to this LJ community, so took me some time to adapt. But I ended up posting it! Hehe!!
It's a Takki & Tsubasa fanfic. It's my first time writing a JE fanfic though. And I'm not that great in writing fanfictions so forgive me if there's some mistakes here and there.
Sorry if it's not to your satisfactions! I'll try my best to write good fanfics! Hope that I will improve in the near future!
Okay, here's the fanfic.. Enjoy!
Title: Collapse
Author:
hanez
Pairing: Takki x Tsubasa
Rating: Hmm, PG?
Summary: Tsubasa recalls that one particular night where he had his heart broken by his lover. And it still hurts, the pain never seems to go away.
Note: It's really a shot one though! I actually have another T&T story going on, currently writing them in MS Word. That one is gonna be a long one.
This is my first fanfic so comment if it's good? And should there be a sequel? Coz this was meant to be a one shot only.
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I never thought that this day would come, the day which I dreaded most eventually did happen. The day where we are no longer as one, where we go our own ways and pretend that nothing had happened. Why? Why must it come to this?
I won’t ever forget that night, my arms sliding in your waist, leaning my head on your shoulder. I felt so happy finally having the chance to be with you again.
We were so busy and had neglected one another. It’s not always we’ll get a chance like this.
We stayed in silence for a moment till your voice leads the way. But I rather have the silent atmosphere surrounding us then to hear those words. They were so short but they pierced right through my heart.
Let’s break up.
I must have heard wrongly. You didn’t really mean it right? I was filled with shock, instantly releasing myself from your warmth. I tried to look at you in the eye, silently begging to make me understand.
It’s only a joke right, Takki?
I asked you that in a trembling voice, holding on to the tears that are threatening to fall any moment.
But that look you gave me is enough to make me break down. You can’t be serious. You can’t hurt me like this. Why end this relationship when we’re doing so fine?
Why? Why, Takki?
You avoided my gaze when I wanted to look at you in the eye to search for some answers. Whispering softly but loud enough for me to hear, you’ve broken my heart once again by saying those hurtful words.
I don’t love you anymore.
I froze, my heart was numb. I can no longer feel myself, I couldn’t hear a thing. This room was suddenly filled with outermost silence. I forced myself to speak though I have no strength to carry on.
So this is all a game to you then. Our love was nothing to you. I’ve been made a fool all the while. I’m such an idiot to believe you!
And for a second you looked guilty as if you didn’t mean what you just said. But that look was gone in a split second.
I just don’t need you any longer. I want to be alone for now.
With that you left the room in a hurry, not once did you ever looked back. And that hurts a lot.
What are you sorry for, Takki? Sorry for hurting me? Or are you apologizing to me because you truly regretted that our relationship has come to an end?
Once I’m sure that you’ve left the house, I dropped to the ground, finally letting out the tears that I’ve tried to hold out. And for the first time ever, Tsubasa Imai was defeated.
“I will never forget this, Takki. You’ve broken my heart.” Tsubasa whispered in between his sobs.
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It's a Takki & Tsubasa fanfic. It's my first time writing a JE fanfic though. And I'm not that great in writing fanfictions so forgive me if there's some mistakes here and there.
Sorry if it's not to your satisfactions! I'll try my best to write good fanfics! Hope that I will improve in the near future!
Okay, here's the fanfic.. Enjoy!
Title: Collapse
Author:
hanez
Pairing: Takki x Tsubasa
Rating: Hmm, PG?
Summary: Tsubasa recalls that one particular night where he had his heart broken by his lover. And it still hurts, the pain never seems to go away.
Note: It's really a shot one though! I actually have another T&T story going on, currently writing them in MS Word. That one is gonna be a long one.
This is my first fanfic so comment if it's good? And should there be a sequel? Coz this was meant to be a one shot only.
~`~
I never thought that this day would come, the day which I dreaded most eventually did happen. The day where we are no longer as one, where we go our own ways and pretend that nothing had happened. Why? Why must it come to this?
I won’t ever forget that night, my arms sliding in your waist, leaning my head on your shoulder. I felt so happy finally having the chance to be with you again.
We were so busy and had neglected one another. It’s not always we’ll get a chance like this.
We stayed in silence for a moment till your voice leads the way. But I rather have the silent atmosphere surrounding us then to hear those words. They were so short but they pierced right through my heart.
Let’s break up.
I must have heard wrongly. You didn’t really mean it right? I was filled with shock, instantly releasing myself from your warmth. I tried to look at you in the eye, silently begging to make me understand.
It’s only a joke right, Takki?
I asked you that in a trembling voice, holding on to the tears that are threatening to fall any moment.
But that look you gave me is enough to make me break down. You can’t be serious. You can’t hurt me like this. Why end this relationship when we’re doing so fine?
Why? Why, Takki?
You avoided my gaze when I wanted to look at you in the eye to search for some answers. Whispering softly but loud enough for me to hear, you’ve broken my heart once again by saying those hurtful words.
I don’t love you anymore.
I froze, my heart was numb. I can no longer feel myself, I couldn’t hear a thing. This room was suddenly filled with outermost silence. I forced myself to speak though I have no strength to carry on.
So this is all a game to you then. Our love was nothing to you. I’ve been made a fool all the while. I’m such an idiot to believe you!
And for a second you looked guilty as if you didn’t mean what you just said. But that look was gone in a split second.
I just don’t need you any longer. I want to be alone for now.
With that you left the room in a hurry, not once did you ever looked back. And that hurts a lot.
What are you sorry for, Takki? Sorry for hurting me? Or are you apologizing to me because you truly regretted that our relationship has come to an end?
Once I’m sure that you’ve left the house, I dropped to the ground, finally letting out the tears that I’ve tried to hold out. And for the first time ever, Tsubasa Imai was defeated.
“I will never forget this, Takki. You’ve broken my heart.” Tsubasa whispered in between his sobs.
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