LJIdol: 3 Strikes - Week 5 - Kuchisabishii

[hangedkay]

“Daniel, take that out of your mouth.”

“He can’t help it, you know.”

“I know, but I don’t have to like it. It’s not proper.”

Darius stared in disgust at the newest member of the family for another few seconds, then sighed and turned back to his conversation. He was comfortable here in his velvet lined chair, a warm drink filling the goblet on the

Comments

[viagra]

I loved the slow burn of the reveal in this one, and the "let's get you someone real to eat" line at the end was just perfect. :) Good work this week!

[engarian]

It seemed as if you were moving in a vampiric direction, and sure enough you were. What a delight.

- Erulisse (one L)

[roina_arwen]

Ah yes, new vamps are always starving! Great job with this.

[beautyofgrey]

Love how this seamlessly moved from what appears to be a discussion that many parents of crawling/toddling infants might have to a much darker, creepier mood!

[mollywheezy]

I thought it was parents discussing a toddler and did not see the vampiric turn coming! *shudder* at the bloody rat . . . Very well done twist with some gore!