LJIdol Week 11 - Wild Goose Chase

[hangedkay]

The lady in white floated across the dreamscape, and her daughter followed.

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“Mom!  Lizzie keeps poking me in the butt!”

“You are a butt,” retorts Elizabeth, her upper lip rising into a smirk

Comments

[roaminghawaii]

Good

[static_abyss]

I loved the dream sequence in the first go around, and all your wonderfully crafted emotion. And then I saw your reference list and it was fun looking up the meaning of things and seeing how you used them in your story.

[nikkiii_brown]

Love your creativity with this piece!

[rayaso]

This was so creative! The dream part was wonderful and I loved your details ("her footed pajamas flopping dangerously off the front of her tiny feet"); they added so much to the story.

[alycewilson]

You really took on a big challenge. Thanks for revealing the references at the end. I'm not sure I would have found them all.