LJIdol Week 12 - Failure

[hangedkay]

In our carefully developed society, everyone has a unique ability.  Which sounds cool at first.  Superpowers are usually every kid’s wet dream.  Flying.  Super speed.  Super strength.  Invisibility.  Who wouldn’t want one of these?  But when everyone’s ability is required to be unique, and the people who have the really cool abilities tend to

Comments

[static_abyss]

This is a really good week because there is so much out there. I love superpowers that aren't your traditional obvious ones. I am so into this story, and definitely would read a whole novel about this. Excellent work!

[nikkiii_brown]

These were my thoughts as well!

[roina_arwen]

Very cool concept, although I feel sorry for the Rejected, even though they brought it on themselves to some degree.

[alexanderscttb]

[murielle]

Taking the haves and the have-nots to a whole new level! Very clever and well written, highly entertaining.

Well done!

[karmasoup]

This is simultaneously absolutely fabulous, and a horrific situation, in multiple respects. This is why people should not be able to engineer people.