LJIdol: 3 Strikes - Week 2 - What Really Matters

Feb 21, 2022 12:27


“Is there any way I’m gonna get out of this with honor and dignity?”

Perhaps not. But we are not Wash and Zoe. We have to think for ourself.

“I can't think of anything original.  I'm only good in support.”

Neither are we Rosencrantz and Guildenstern. Stop spinning coins. Trust in who we are.

“Nothing else matters.”

Nice. However, we are not James ( Read more... )

ljidol, 3 strikes

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viagra February 25 2022, 17:04:53 UTC
Your writing is very artful in a lot of ways, and rarely immediate, which is what I find so intriguing about it. I enjoyed this one a lot, even if I wasn't quite sure where it was going while I was in the moment. The last line shocked me almost! Good work this week :)

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static_abyss February 26 2022, 23:47:25 UTC
This was such an interesting read. I would love to read more about this world and these characters. I especially love how every character had a distinct voice and different ideals and yet they're working together. Great story!

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baxaphobia February 27 2022, 16:20:03 UTC
I loved the multiple voices and perspectives. Nicely done!

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d0gs February 27 2022, 17:35:24 UTC
This was so interesting with the different perspectives. I really enjoyed this!

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numero_nine February 28 2022, 18:34:48 UTC
You packed a lot of characterization into such a short piece that made this really enjoyable. I liked watching the different characters play out. Really well done.

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