fic: Road to Damascus (2/?)

[hankmoodyblues]

Second in an ongoing series of vignettes detailing Hank and Karen's lives during her pregnancy.

Title: Fill Your Paper With the Breathings of Your Heart
Fandom: Californication
Rating: PG-13 for drug references and language but nothing graphic
Pairing: Hank/Karen
Spoilers: Working off the montage of clips from the end of In Utero but they're only

Comments

[hummingfly67]

♥

“The guy who wrote this must be a fucking asshole,” he says, making light of his morning failings.

“That’s the father of my child you’re talking about,” she protests.

Them.

[hankmoodyblues]

Glad you think so! I'm always wary with dialogue; definitely not my strong point.

[airolf]

So rich in description and similes and comparison (love the allusion to Charles Dickens!)

Have you seen episodes 1 and 2 of seasons 3???

[hankmoodyblues]

Well, it seems that every Dickens story I read focuses strongly on coincidental happenings and meetings, so I thought I'd throw it in there.

I have, yes. Epic squee!

[hankmoodyblues]

Cheers. Really wasn't feelin' it when I was writing it yesterday but it's not as bad as I thought it was, overall.

[forbiddenxspark]

Hank versus the typewriter.
Oh, nothing fits better!

Again, very well written. And onto the third.

You're making me wanna start writing fics again! Ah, shucks.

[hankmoodyblues]

Get writing! I'd love to read.